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Poems - Gloomy day

Gloomy day

by jadia4708au

Gloomy day

I woke up to find a gloomy day
It takes me thousands of kilometers away
I wept in corner and lamented of having no sister
Only concern that kept me sad and bothered

Like me many more unlucky people may be in world
Who may have no sister to feel safely in fold?
Brother may feel alone on this auspicious day
When sister remains in mind and he has lot more to say

India is celebrating * Rakshbandhan* festival today
Sister is tying thread around wrist of brother
It reminds him of his sacred duty to protect her
A rare occasion that binds him forever

As I feel sad and unlucky
The question is very much tricky
I am visibly moved and remain shaky
As same is blessed to me by almighty

Sisters may be feeling great today
As this one is considered as an auspicious day
It reminds us of great obligation on the part of brother
To stand by in critical times and protect her

Yet I feel happy about others too
As they are lucky to feel happiness through
The warmth and motherly affection from her
That shall provide all times happiness and shelter

* Rakhshabandhan…Tying of thread by sister *

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Re: Gloomy day (Score: 1 )
by jadia4708au on Thursday, August 02, 2012 (02:21:43)

Debbie Pouw Beautiful Hasmukh would you be my brother ? So I can openly tying thread around your wrist.. Because I alway missed my 2 brothers in this life.. They never protect me..I don't blame them for this.. What a beautiful symbolic day ♥

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Re: Gloomy day (Score: 1 )
by jadia4708au on Thursday, August 02, 2012 (02:22:01)

Malkeet Kaur Happy Rakshabandhan brother :-)This is the most touching and divine poem! 7 minutes ago via mobile · Like

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Re: Gloomy day (Score: 1 )
by jadia4708au on Thursday, August 02, 2012 (02:22:24)

Debbie Pouw Thanks Hasmukh..I hope you can feel the tender touch and the Love This is touching also my heart very deeply thanks ♥♥♥ 6 minutes ago · Like

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Re: Gloomy day (Score: 1 )
by jadia4708au on Thursday, August 02, 2012 (02:22:45)

Date & Time: 8/2/2012 12:36:00 AM Remove this comment Poem: 32199795 - Gloomy day Member: Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi Comment: Don't worry HA. there are so many sisters for you in this website, as you are quite involved with the literary work! Happy Rakhshabandhan. Dear Brother! 2 minutes ago · Like

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Re: Gloomy day (Score: 1 )
by Rabbitt on Thursday, August 02, 2012 (21:08:03)

Interesting. I wonder how men feel on this day who never had a sister.

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Re: Gloomy day (Score: 1 )
by jadia4708au on Friday, August 03, 2012 (01:00:23)

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Re: Gloomy day (Score: 1 )
by jadia4708au on Friday, August 03, 2012 (19:30:56)

* D*E*V*S *
WONDERFUL CREATION ,THANK YOU .WISH YOU ALL THE BEST DEAR

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Re: Gloomy day (Score: 1 )
by jadia4708au on Friday, August 03, 2012 (19:31:55)

riaz1951
NICE

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Re: Gloomy day (Score: 1 )
by jadia4708au on Friday, August 03, 2012 (19:32:32)

« Delete »

Elżbieta Kry..
nice...

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