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I

by Gary

Upon an airplane wing I fly
And I wonder why,
Why why why

In a sailing boat I sail
Across the oceans sigh,
Sigh sigh sigh


Upon this dusty land I trek
Like a man left to die,
Die die die


In these garments spilled
with blood and splashed with lies,
Lie lie lie


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Re: I (Score: 1 )
by fogglethorpe on Friday, August 10, 2012 (13:42:44)
I like the worksong feel of this. Intriguing little poem.

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    Re: I (Score: 1 )
    by Gary on Friday, August 10, 2012 (17:25:57)
    Thank u for not rating this
    personal piece too and also
    For pointing out that's it's
    song like, I hadn't noticed.
    Your very professional comments
    are well appreciatedddddddd!!!thanks.

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Re: I (Score: 1 )
by flowergirl on Saturday, August 11, 2012 (10:17:35)
on the wings of the wind
I am carried away from beyond
not knowing where I may land

sailing across the green sea
leaving the cares of my heart
with no more worries

as I feel my soul slowly dying
I draw my last deep breath
as my lonely journey ends

my blood stained the earth
where I lay me down
to forever sleep in peace

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    Re: I (Score: 1 )
    by Gary on Saturday, August 11, 2012 (22:28:02)
    Wo that's poetry!!!!!!Thanx Gail!!!

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Re: I (Score: 1 )
by Rabbitt on Saturday, August 11, 2012 (10:18:37)
Short title. Interesting read with a pleasant cadence. Bob

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    Re: I (Score: 1 )
    by Gary on Saturday, August 11, 2012 (22:29:28)
    Thank you Bob I've come
    to know that your comments
    are from the soul. Kind rgs
    Ggggggary

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Re: I (Score: 1 )
by TygerTyger on Saturday, August 11, 2012 (17:29:40)
Very unusual but I enjoyed it well done. Pete.

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    Re: I (Score: 1 )
    by Gary on Saturday, August 11, 2012 (22:30:23)
    Hey Pete Its good to hear from
    You thank you!!!!!!

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