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Poems - Love is so annoying

Love is so annoying

by June-22-95-Mahala

He said that I was a nasty whore,
That's when he went to far.
I took the gun from the drawer,
That's when I went to far.
He said no please don't hurt me. I still love you,
That's when he crossed the line.
I said that's not the point. You dust don't get the clue,
That's when I crossed the line.
He said he was sorry that he never meant it,
That's when he made the space between us bigger.
I said that he never loved me,
That's when I pulled the triger.

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I think you have a n (Score: 1 )
by vexations on Monday, July 02, 2007 (07:38:18)

I think you have a neat little write here but "proof." I am think you mean just instead of dust and trigger instead of triger. Otherwise I get it.

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It was his own fault (Score: 1 )
by spence on Sunday, October 14, 2007 (13:44:27)

It was his own fault for calling you a nasty whore in my opinion! He saw the error of his ways- but only when you had a gun at his head.
I think I'll show this poem to my 12 year olds boyfriend! take care, spence

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so annoying???? i l (Score: 1 )
by phishy on Wednesday, January 14, 2009 (02:36:34)

so annoying???? i love the image you sent out. amazing stuff

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Re: Love is so annoying (Score: 1 )
by daizy on Saturday, August 08, 2009 (11:18:23)

really good

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Re: Love is so annoying (Score: 1 )
by butterflyzrfree on Sunday, November 01, 2009 (13:22:34)

You were 12 years old when you wrote it? Wow! Sounds like CSI my favorite TV show! Real action. I assume this did not really happen...Gail take care! Twelve years old...you ARE a genius even if it pisses you off when people say so...

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