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Days of the week

by Laurissa

Monday you said you needed a friend,
i told you i was busy working agian.
Tuesday i waited for your call,
by Wednesday i had nothing at all.
Thursday night we took a ride,
we was waiting right out side.
As i pushed open your door,
your feet didnt even reach the floor,
On your desk was a note,
picking it up i saw you wrote,
my friend my solemate,
i didnt even ge tto tell you how i felt,
but now its too late.
Friday i phoned your mum,
i told her what you had done.
She started to cry and said shed miss her boy,
Saturday i told a friend,
she said she already knew for she was there too.
Sunday night i sat awake and cried,
for it had finally sunk in that you died.





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suicide is always on (Score: 1 )
by combat_chic on Wednesday, January 09, 2008 (00:43:00)
suicide is always one of the hardest things to deal with... i don't know if this is true or not... but if it is... a support group does help...

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Re: Days of the week (Score: 1 )
by MissCJMonroe on Friday, November 04, 2011 (18:02:42)
I think this was a inventive idea that provided a good structure to open, move along, and close in a strong way.

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