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Poems - I want you

I want you

by June-22-95-Mahala

Your right, I do deserve better then you.
But I don't care your the one I want.
The car crash may have been your fault,
But hey we all make mistakes.
I'm willing to forget what happened that night.
Even though you said you could'nt take advantage of me any more.
You never forced me to have sex with you.
And just as we had agreeded I will when I want to.
So what if you are'nt rich and you mom is a crack head.
I want you and I know you want me too.
Don't go on about how you love me but you don't deserve me,
Because as far as I'm concerned you deserve me as much as any other person.

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so real (Score: 1 )
by liscious on Sunday, September 23, 2007 (21:06:12)

so real

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In the 2nd line 'you (Score: 1 )
by katilady on Sunday, December 16, 2007 (14:23:32)

In the 2nd line 'your' should be 'you're'. I am not sure what you meant by the word 'agreeded', is it just a misspelling for a 'agreed'?

That said this poem certainly strikes a familiar chord for me. Nice.

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Love it! Thanks Jon (Score: 1 )
by schlegel on Tuesday, March 10, 2009 (18:30:30)

Love it! Thanks Jon

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Re: I want you (Score: 1 )
by MissCJMonroe on Friday, November 04, 2011 (17:54:08)

I like this style, this bold and relate-able honesty. As a filmmaker, this came into my head as the audio of a diary being read.

Nice work. Smile

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