User Info

Welcome Anonymous

Yesterday's Top

Rank Name

01: fogglethorpe

02: life2all

03: oxavier

04: tint

05: Twelve

06: ossy

07: raw

08: zoe_in_a_bubble

09: york2frisco

10: notapoet

11: odinroark

12: angelateague87

13: brandywine

14: Rabbitt

15: induce

More ...

Donations

Above and Beyond

GotPoetry is a community supported site.

Due Date: May 31
May Goal: 180.00
Gross Amount: 0.00
PayPal Fees: 0.00
Net Balance: 0.00
Below Goal: 180.00
Site Currency: USD

Poems - Too bad

Too bad

by aprilhoskins

One man is born.
One man dies.
A mother grieves.
A mother smiles.
One man gives.
One man takes.
To late in life he sees his mistakes.
One man suffers.
One man thrives.
One man has sorrow.
One man has joy.
Br thankful of what you have today.
Tommorrow it may be taken away.
Never forget to say I love you.
And to forgive with a heart that's true.
Only few things are certain inlife.
You will have joys and also strife.
Live for each moment as if it were your last.
It is to late once the moment has passed.
And never take forgranted those who are sincere.
Keep an open mind not controlled by fear.
Keep all these things in mind.
And peace is what you will find.

<< prev | Classic and General Poetry | next >>

"Too bad" | Login/Create an Account | 3

The comments are owned by the poster. We aren't responsible for their content.

Beautiful and so tru (Score: 1 )
by HerWill on Sunday, December 30, 2007 (18:32:56)

Beautiful and so true. I can relate.

| Parent

The beginning is fin (Score: 1 )
by zhaul on Tuesday, June 17, 2008 (19:00:46)

The beginning is fine but the break into larger lines a e
poem is yet to be written, needs some work, add imagery, metaphor and take care of the sequence of thoughts

| Parent

Re: Too bad (Score: 1 )
by AgaMaria on Monday, April 26, 2010 (10:46:58)

It's a smooth read and very moving. You used a lot of different sayings in one poem and kept it flowing. line 12 made a mistake with "Br". I really like it.

| Parent

[ aprilhoskins's profile | Commenting Members (3) |

]

Added on: 29-Sep-2007 | Hits: 347 |

Full author copyright - Exclusive Right held by author.