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Somebodys daughter

by aprilhoskins

Somebody's daughter is alone tonight.
She lies and suffers and gives up the fight.
To much blood has shed to survive.
Her spirits weakened by the fire.
She gave up so very long ago.
He took what was left of her soul.
He never cared what damage he did.
As long as it made him feel like a man.
And now he's runing for his life.
He knows they know him but he don't know why.
Somebody's daughter was all she was.
And he is running from...sombodys father.
Alone he will die and suffer.
He should not have messed with sombodys daughter.




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Agreed. Righteous an (Score: 1 )
by spence on Thursday, October 11, 2007 (00:59:47)
Agreed. Righteous anger- nice one, spence

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    Agreed. Righteous an (Score: 1 )
    by aprilhoskins on Friday, October 12, 2007 (10:09:48)
    Hello again spence. You're becomeing my cheering section. *smile* as always dear your comments are appreciated.

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you didn't say what (Score: 1 )
by Deathline on Thursday, October 11, 2007 (10:34:00)
you didn't say what that man did to her. made me curious. really nice

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    you didn't say what (Score: 1 )
    by aprilhoskins on Friday, October 12, 2007 (10:08:50)
    You're right I didn't say. Because damage can be done thousands of ways...and once upon a time I was somebodys daughter. Thank you for he comment and the rateing.

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i'm sure that behind (Score: 1 )
by zhaul on Tuesday, June 17, 2008 (15:58:09)
i'm sure that behind this words a great poem is yet to be written, needs some work, add imagery, metaphor and take care of the sequence or thoughts, it is very important to do so.

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