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Poems - What you've done

What you've done

by SummerLee

Thoughts and memories
collide
I dont know what to say
or feel
what things in your life
could be so bad
that you just want to let go
and die
I won't pretend to understand
because there is no way I can
what you have done
has ruined
so much
so many lives
mourn
for what YOU
almost lost
and even though you didn't succeed
you've killed a part
of each person
you love.

(Written for a friend, who has a friend, that is going through this)

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yes its so hard to f (Score: 1 )
by shay45 on Monday, December 17, 2007 (19:27:13)

yes its so hard to fathom it all out,. yes selfish, and yes sad good poem though on a sorry subject.
Shay.

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yes its so hard to f (Score: 1 )
by SummerLee on Tuesday, December 18, 2007 (00:31:35)

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tough topic ...very (Score: 1 )
by graphitegirl on Tuesday, December 18, 2007 (18:59:18)

tough topic ...very expressive write. G

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tough topic ...very (Score: 1 )
by SummerLee on Tuesday, December 18, 2007 (23:56:10)

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Poignant, touching, (Score: 1 )
by Nolip on Sunday, December 30, 2007 (09:54:19)

Poignant, touching, compelling and a challenge...well done.

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Poignant, touching, (Score: 1 )
by SummerLee on Sunday, December 30, 2007 (23:54:23)

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