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plea

by fogglethorpe

Tell me I’m more
than fissures and breaches
synapses and sin lapses
a forfeit between the flashes
of glory
and the worst of seasons

Tell me I’m more
than art and chemistry
pulp and electricity
the mere sum of the agony
of free will
and the curse of reason





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fogglethorpe, i like (Score: 1 )
by induce on Friday, February 01, 2008 (13:13:35)
fogglethorpe, i like your play with words and the movement . induCe


NICE FLOW... liked (Score: 1 )
by sixthjan on Friday, March 07, 2008 (12:35:14)
NICE FLOW... liked it..cheers bro. keep penning. and welcome


My favorite lines? A (Score: 1 )
by zhaul on Wednesday, June 11, 2008 (19:37:26)
My favorite lines? All, Splendid, good, great and all the simile words.


I saw this poem in t (Score: 1 )
by Mayah on Thursday, November 06, 2008 (21:32:12)
I saw this poem in the page slam... simply awesome... I loved it!... well written my friend... Maya


thought this was a v (Score: 1 )
by tenderhate18 on Monday, November 10, 2008 (15:09:26)
thought this was a very interesting write. nice flow, choice of words. great.


this is flippin exce (Score: 1 )
by ColourMyWorld on Thursday, November 27, 2008 (14:37:13)
this is flippin excellent


I really love this! (Score: 1 )
by Kae on Saturday, November 29, 2008 (00:26:27)
I really love this! It's just succinct and beautiful and full of honesty. Be very proud of this work.
-Kae


Hi..just got around (Score: 1 )
by realrhoda on Saturday, December 20, 2008 (12:51:52)
Hi..just got around to reading this..amazingly
poetic in its angst..love it..realrhoda


I don't know alot ab (Score: 1 )
by listentothesound on Wednesday, January 21, 2009 (10:35:25)
I don't know alot about poetry...but this poem is AWESOME!! It flows beautifully, and every line could mean so many things! Nice work - Dave


And the curse of rea (Score: 1 )
by forwind14 on Monday, January 26, 2009 (16:21:26)
And the curse of reason...

I like that : )


Exceptional! Fond Re (Score: 1 )
by Leggolas on Monday, January 26, 2009 (16:29:11)
Exceptional! Fond Regards. Leggolas.


wow. i love it. it a (Score: 1 )
by katiep on Monday, April 06, 2009 (16:32:33)
wow. i love it. it almost made me cry to tell you the truth, because i felt so connected to it. great GREAT job Very Happy


I think you are more (Score: 1 )
by Audie on Thursday, April 09, 2009 (17:49:28)
I think you are more. This poem has a wonderful flow. A favorite of mine.


really like this one (Score: 1 )
by idunnouxpt36 on Thursday, April 23, 2009 (23:41:57)
really like this one


Wow.. that was amazi (Score: 1 )
by AccuzedOfLivin on Wednesday, May 27, 2009 (08:28:15)
Wow.. that was amazing. Very impressed with the flow like so many already said. makes ya think to. great job


Re: plea (Score: 1 )
by zavalaland on Sunday, June 21, 2009 (02:00:08)
One of the best I have ever read.


Re: plea (Score: 1 )
by micsir on Saturday, July 25, 2009 (15:55:53)
You definetly are more than all that. Spectacular!


Re: plea (Score: 1 )
by MTPOET on Tuesday, August 18, 2009 (12:04:50)
GOOD

  • Re: plea by fogglethorpe on Wednesday, August 19

Re: plea (Score: 1 )
by radical_love on Monday, September 07, 2009 (01:49:16)
"synapses and sin lapses"
GOLD.
short and succulent.
fantastic and interesting juxtapositions.
thankyou for sharing.


Re: plea
by Anonymous on Saturday, September 12, 2009 (10:59:39)



Re: plea (Score: 1 )
by poetlost on Sunday, October 18, 2009 (17:07:30)
short and sweet. i love it.


Re: plea (Score: 1 )
by Camille on Wednesday, October 21, 2009 (16:57:50)
Wonderful work. I really enjoyed reading this. Very Happy


Re: plea (Score: 1 )
by nerdgirl on Wednesday, October 21, 2009 (17:54:46)
excellent poem!


Re: plea (Score: 1 )
by fogglethorpe on Wednesday, October 28, 2009 (11:30:15)
Wow. Thanks everyone. I am grateful for your time and kind words.



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