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Poems - Pebble Or Pearl?
| | Pebble Or Pearl?by Temptress
She thinks she is a mere grain of sand in a shell
Until opened and comes to the realization she is much more
A Pearl who is treasured by the one who has opened her
And see's the true beauty that lies within.
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Great write. Confuc
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by Neatkeith on Friday, February 08, 2008 (09:01:49) |
Great write. Confucius could not have said it better.
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Great write. Confuc
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by Temptress on Friday, February 08, 2008 (10:55:38) |
Thank you Keith a little something that I came up with after reading some of my fellow poets (namely women) poems and came to the conclusion at one point in time we consider ourselves to be nothing more than what we see, but when someone else comes along and makes us feel and know that we are something special makes life worth while. For that I thank you for opening up my shell and letting my light shine thru your beautiful blue eyes.
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PERFECTION!!! So en
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by Christa on Friday, February 08, 2008 (12:58:18) |
PERFECTION!!! So encouraging and gives me hope. ~ For all your Kindness ~ Christa
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PERFECTION!!! So en
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by Temptress on Friday, February 08, 2008 (15:20:40) |
Thank you sister for reading and it was just a small something to let the women know that it only takes that one special someone to make a difference in our lives.
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This is a PERFECT wr
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by Meggirl on Friday, February 08, 2008 (13:51:40) |
This is a PERFECT write. So well said with such few words!! Perfect.
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This is a PERFECT wr
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by Temptress on Friday, February 08, 2008 (15:22:48) |
Thank you it makes my heart aglow seeing people relating and bonding with each other. I love the fact we can openly express our true feelings. To me every woman is a gem to be treasured.
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Aaahhh you are the t
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by wickedone on Friday, February 08, 2008 (17:27:15) |
Aaahhh you are the treasure yourself; my what a way you have with words. Lovely and just beautiful my friend; thank you...W
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Aaahhh you are the t
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by Temptress on Saturday, February 09, 2008 (14:16:43) |
Thank you Wanda ,always nice to see you have stopped by ,your comment is treasured.
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very good write anyo
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by Glen on Friday, February 08, 2008 (18:26:59) |
very good write anyone would know you are special
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very good write anyo
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by Temptress on Saturday, February 09, 2008 (14:17:38) |
XOXOXOX's for you Glen, thanks for the comment and most generous rating.
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GREAT!
Doug
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by Doug22cal on Saturday, February 09, 2008 (00:38:49) |
GREAT!
Doug
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GREAT!
Doug
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by Temptress on Saturday, February 09, 2008 (14:18:28) |
Thank you so much for the comment and rating Doug
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this has great insig
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by graphitegirl on Saturday, February 09, 2008 (04:30:37) |
this has great insight and emotions.
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this has great insig
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by Temptress on Saturday, February 09, 2008 (14:19:32) |
I try to write a little inspirational stuff from time to time.Your comment is valued GG.
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So good.
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by John on Saturday, February 09, 2008 (22:44:47) |
So good.
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So good.
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by Temptress on Sunday, February 10, 2008 (10:20:25) |
Thank you John for your comment, it's funny it only takes that one person who makes you see something you can not, to make a world of difference in one's self.
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lovely write.
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by mamta on Sunday, February 10, 2008 (01:53:08) |
lovely write.
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lovely write.
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by Temptress on Sunday, February 10, 2008 (10:21:07) |
Many thanks to you mamta for stopping by and reading my poetry.
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Very nicely written,
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by Bogeyman on Sunday, February 10, 2008 (13:01:41) |
Very nicely written, T.! Still think the self-value should be there with or without someone opening the shell with a rusty knife...lol, but I can see your point! Appreciation is always a catalyst...  B.
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Very nicely written,
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by Temptress on Sunday, February 10, 2008 (13:07:18) |
Thank you Boris you are abosolutely correct about knowing one's self worth but it's also nice to hear it from an outside source, wouldn't you agree?
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Wow! So beautiful a
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by Blondie on Monday, February 11, 2008 (11:30:25) |
Wow! So beautiful and such a powerful small poem. I love this Temptress!
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Wow! So beautiful a
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by Temptress on Monday, February 11, 2008 (12:42:55) |
Thank you so much Tina for stopping by your comment is valued and so are the PM's
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Temptress, there's m
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by loisseau on Sunday, February 17, 2008 (12:00:22) |
Temptress, there's much to like about the ideas in this poem, but the execution suffers. If you work-shopped this, readers would have pointed out the punctuation errors, capitalization issues, etc. Then the poem truly would be worth the rating praise placed on it.
L.
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Temptress, there's m
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by Temptress on Sunday, February 17, 2008 (19:10:12) |
Thanks for your input but I'm not a serious poet but a woman who needs to express herself from time to time. The comment and generous rating is appreciated.
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