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Alone on Valentines Day

by spence

Rose Is Red- Violet Is Blue
Rose bled to death: Violet drowned in the pool.
The sky was blue: The grass was green
I buried them both by the edge of a stream.
Found months later: Their skin had turned grey,
Forensics tracked me down from my DNA
I was questioned at home by the boys in blue
I answered, 'God told me to kill prostitutes'
I was sentenced to hell- dressed in white
Within this padded cell for the rest of my life.





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What the HELL???? D (Score: 1 )
by Christa on Monday, February 11, 2008 (13:47:57)
What the HELL???? Dang, you really made the thought of Valentines Day very depressing. ~ Much Love and Thanks ~ Christa

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    What the HELL???? D (Score: 1 )
    by spence on Monday, February 11, 2008 (17:11:38)
    Sorry! I'm just lonely in this cell is all!!! ; )

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What Cell!! I thoug (Score: 1 )
by graphitegirl on Monday, February 11, 2008 (23:30:42)
What Cell!! I thought this showed some imagination! gg

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    What Cell!! I thoug (Score: 1 )
    by spence on Tuesday, February 12, 2008 (09:00:08)
    The cell of my warped little mind!

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:(( (Score: 1 )
by anna9 on Tuesday, February 12, 2008 (02:19:59)
Sad(

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    :(( (Score: 1 )
    by spence on Tuesday, February 12, 2008 (09:01:21)
    Thanks anna- I didn't leave too much room for questions on this one, my warped sense of humour overtook my thought processes! spence.

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Wow! (Score: 1 )
by Julia715 on Thursday, February 21, 2008 (14:10:16)
Wow!

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    Wow! (Score: 1 )
    by spence on Friday, February 22, 2008 (15:19:12)
    Thanks once again! I wanted to do something different for valentine's day!!! I get so sick of the smoochy sentiment! I'd rather say I love someone every day and ignore the shit! They make us pay for everything- isn't v-day just 'love tax'?! spence

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Spence, You're such (Score: 1 )
by Nolip on Tuesday, March 04, 2008 (17:29:52)
Spence,
You're such a romantic.
John

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    Spence, You're such (Score: 1 )
    by spence on Friday, April 25, 2008 (11:02:56)
    Thanks for taking the time to read, vote and comment on my work- please excuse ‘standard’ message. My CPU’s been a pain for the last coupla months and I try to make a point of answering every comment. Thanks again and I promise a more prompt response in future, take care, spence

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all i gots tah say i (Score: 1 )
by GraY on Monday, March 10, 2008 (15:43:23)
all i gots tah say is...DAMN this is good lolz


--gray

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    all i gots tah say i (Score: 1 )
    by spence on Friday, April 25, 2008 (11:03:10)
    Thanks for taking the time to read, vote and comment on my work- please excuse ‘standard’ message. My CPU’s been a pain for the last coupla months and I try to make a point of answering every comment. Thanks again and I promise a more prompt response in future, take care, spence

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Dam Spence! O.o I l (Score: 1 )
by Carnos on Tuesday, March 18, 2008 (15:43:36)
Dam Spence! O.o
I liked =X
Carnos

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    Dam Spence! O.o I l (Score: 1 )
    by spence on Friday, April 25, 2008 (11:03:35)
    Thanks for taking the time to read, vote and comment on my work- please excuse ‘standard’ message. My CPU’s been a pain for the last coupla months and I try to make a point of answering every comment. Thanks again and I promise a more prompt response in future, take care, spence

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gave me chills. :) (Score: 1 )
by EGranholm on Monday, July 07, 2008 (17:11:56)
gave me chills. Smile

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Re: Alone on Valentines Day (Score: 1 )
by MissCJMonroe on Friday, November 04, 2011 (18:15:06)
I think this was well thought out, darkly humorous, and nicely carried out.

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Re: Alone on Valentines Day (Score: 1 )
by Ilan on Friday, November 04, 2011 (18:32:24)
Drama plus you paint a pretty awful

Scene

Good poem Spence
God save us all
Ilan

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