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I Cut Myself

by June-22-95-Mahala

I cut myself last night,
And I really don't know why.

ten slices on my arm,
not once did I cry.

I saw my mom last night,
she did'nt look like her.

I cut myself last night,
and I think it's because of cancer.





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talk to me mahala. i (Score: 1 )
by omegapaf on Thursday, February 28, 2008 (01:37:42)
talk to me mahala. i'm not joking around kid. answer my private message, and tell me you are all right.

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emotive, poignant an (Score: 1 )
by darkblues on Thursday, February 28, 2008 (12:12:40)
emotive, poignant and shows a strength in your writing that is not scared of important topics that should not be swept under the carpet but that need to discussed, writing it in poem form is such an affective way of doing it....well done and take care...DB

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I'm sorry, I don't l (Score: 1 )
by Joe-Panubris on Friday, February 29, 2008 (21:53:10)
I'm sorry, I don't like this. I think people give out 10's on this site too frivolously. This just seems like the ramblings of an angsty teenager in my eyes.

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    I'm sorry, I don't l (Score: 1 )
    by darkblues on Saturday, March 01, 2008 (09:51:11)
    I thought that this had the key ingredient to a good poem- raw emotion and should be taken for what it is. If an angst ridden teenager wrote it or otherwise it should be applauded, focus should be on the words of the poem...you sound like an angst ridden old man who has forgotton about his own youth (lol, see what I mean)....just wanted to put over my point of view not wishing to offend you.

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painful inside, cutt (Score: 1 )
by zhaul on Thursday, June 12, 2008 (21:10:41)
painful inside, cutting for relief. Why is that? Need to find someone to talk, to lean on, to cry, grieve, and to get stronger. before the cuts become a labyrinth to be lost and never to find the way out.

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i get it, i always d (Score: 1 )
by phishy on Friday, January 30, 2009 (08:12:47)
i get it, i always did. i used to cut years ago, just to release all the pain within. the sight of the red becomes the high you crave

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