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red untitled

by peeler

Here's to proposing a reality check
conductor of trains and thought
peeler of swallowed whole
Sweden puddles below my ankles
and I can only hope she is a peach
I suppose i try to hallucinate more often then not
all i get is searing reality
just as a motherly caress washes and recedes
I gently cradle a stone once recieved
as a gift
from the youngest of five




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Galaxy thought strin (Score: 1 )
by induce on Sunday, June 24, 2007 (11:20:49)
Galaxy thought strings, strung and woven.

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Re: red untitled (Score: 1 )
by zhaul on Thursday, March 25, 2010 (06:32:52)
I think this one could use more imagery, I got a little lost on lines 4-5
but the last 3 lines are some how great.

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