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Poems - You complete me; Like an Ace to the Black Jack.

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You complete me; Like an Ace to the Black Jack.

by Zeao

Come this November,
I’ll turn 21.
And I know that on my birthday,
Mother Nature and Father Time will work their magic.

But their magic couldn’t fix it;
Each year was just as empty as the one before.
To stay sane I had to keep telling myself
I’ll find my Yin ‘cause I’m a Yang.

I moved forward,
Watching my life pass me by.
It’s so hard to be happy,
When you’re a Romeo without his Juliet.

Then when I had given up,
I finally found her.
I can’t believe I couldn't see her beside me,
I guess it’s true; she’s Oxy while I’m a Moron.

Now, with all my years of bliss
That I wouldn’t have had without her.
I thought I should let her know,
I’m the Jack and you’re my Ace.





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AWWWWWWW...lucky ace (Score: 1 )
by GrannyDeepSea on Sunday, April 06, 2008 (20:03:06)
AWWWWWWW...lucky ace and lucky jack!!!

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    AWWWWWWW...lucky ace (Score: 1 )
    by Zeao on Monday, April 07, 2008 (09:35:06)
    Thanks GDS. Yeah, "lucky" is a good way to describe it.

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Hey..I loved this... (Score: 1 )
by Islandgrrl on Sunday, April 06, 2008 (23:44:13)
Hey..I loved this....you lucky pair!! Islandgrrl....

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    Hey..I loved this... (Score: 1 )
    by Zeao on Monday, April 07, 2008 (09:36:05)
    That's awesome, lol. I'm happy that a poem of mine got so many responses.

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^^ Lol, again I tota (Score: 1 )
by HopefulSanity18 on Monday, April 07, 2008 (09:03:31)
^^ Lol, again I totally love this soooo much and I love what you decided to name it! Its all amazing!!

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    ^^ Lol, again I tota (Score: 1 )
    by Zeao on Monday, April 07, 2008 (09:37:13)
    Ahaha, I knew you would love it! Did you notice the little changes I did?

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    ^^ Lol, again I tota (Score: 1 )
    by HopefulSanity18 on Monday, April 07, 2008 (16:08:56)
    Lol : ) Yeah, i did, they make it even better ^^

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That my friend is th (Score: 1 )
by Temptress on Monday, April 07, 2008 (09:24:57)
That my friend is the natural and only 2 cards that is the most powerful hand on the table. Good write Zeao.

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    That my friend is th (Score: 1 )
    by Zeao on Monday, April 07, 2008 (09:38:29)
    Thanks Temptress. It really means a lot getting a good review from you. When i first started up on this site I spent a lot of time trying to write as well as you do, now that I see you giving one of my poems a 10... Well, it really makes my day. Thank you!

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creative excellence (Score: 1 )
by questionajourney on Monday, April 07, 2008 (17:43:36)
creative excellence in my opinion Zeao:) Quest

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    creative excellence (Score: 1 )
    by Zeao on Monday, April 07, 2008 (19:28:20)
    Thanks man, I really appreciate it!

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Loved this, everyone (Score: 1 )
by Missy on Friday, April 18, 2008 (21:28:13)
Loved this, everyone needs their pair, a match that lives above the rest. Good creativeness and flow.
-Melis

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    Loved this, everyone (Score: 1 )
    by Zeao on Saturday, April 19, 2008 (20:05:21)
    Thanks so much. But really, good poems like this are only created when you have an awesome muse, and I think she is the best muse I could have ever asked for, lol! Thanks for the comment!

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omg, that is adorabl (Score: 1 )
by heyzzz:> on Wednesday, May 14, 2008 (22:58:41)
omg, that is adorable, well done!!! : )

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