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what kind of a perso (Score: 1 )
by alana on Sunday, May 11, 2008 (09:53:46)

what kind of a person would not finish chips and popcorn ? and icecream ?

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what kind of a perso (Score: 1 )
by Treagal on Sunday, May 11, 2008 (12:13:12)

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you left room for a (Score: 1 )
by GrannyDeepSea on Sunday, May 11, 2008 (17:11:11)

you left room for a double meaning by using of instead of in...so then i got confused, so i read the comment...saw your reply...noted the title...a lot brewed from a simple 575...so i see this little ghost trying to finish chips now

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you left room for a (Score: 1 )
by Treagal on Sunday, May 11, 2008 (17:54:00)

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it's like finding th (Score: 1 )
by questionajourney on Monday, May 12, 2008 (22:58:25)

it's like finding the best chip in the worls, enjoying them and then dying before the swallow is complete..eery and great T_Q

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a good visual metaph (Score: 1 )
by WHMechem on Friday, May 16, 2008 (13:37:38)

a good visual metaphor.

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I like the metaphor (Score: 1 )
by varivas on Tuesday, May 20, 2008 (20:53:34)

I like the metaphor in this a lot. However, in line 2, "loose" should be "lose". "loose" is the opposite of "tight", "lose" is the opposite of "find".

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Re: deleted (Score: 1 )
by zhaul on Sunday, July 04, 2010 (22:20:03)

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