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Rock Candimonium

by greygrynn

Her 07 ‘Stang rumble-sniffs behind.
Eight aluminum forged pistons git-pop lighting fast
up and down in a custom racing block.

Mill’s overbalanced, beyond strong just prowling,
yet taking “pinks” a delicious cruel pleasure.
No “boys” allowed!

Through gun smoke grey windshield, her Aztec
cut jaw barely shows, cadaver dead line,
perfectly glossed lips unsmiling.

Gently rocks slow, staccato side-to-side, in-tune with
jagged, bored, idle. Exhaust cannon-blast
“Yeah – Right, you not car enough tonight”

Yellow-white sunlight glitter-flashes off
dark, slick, grape-soda Imron painted flanks.
She blip-feints to the left and disappears down
a languidly winding, licorice-black, suburban street.

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I just went from zer (Score: 1 )
by graphitegirl on Monday, June 02, 2008 (23:29:56)
I just went from zero to 60 in a 2 seconds and wow this one really got my heart racing better than me actually racing! great write GG

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i always get a kick (Score: 1 )
by Mayo on Monday, June 16, 2008 (11:39:09)
i always get a kick out of reading your work. it is so recognizably "you" and it always makes me feel comfortable, like sitting with a good friend.

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OK, this was a damn (Score: 1 )
by galley_poet on Tuesday, June 17, 2008 (18:03:10)
OK, this was a damn good poem and was as evocative of racing as Cake's song ["]Going The Distance[/]

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Re: Rock Candimonium (Score: 1 )
by schlegel on Tuesday, July 28, 2009 (22:51:41)
Heh a Ford. Jon

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