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Poems - How Nice To Be A Naughty Frog!

How Nice To Be A Naughty Frog!

by QUILL-AND-PEN

Reading love in your eye's gives me pride.
I am floating on that lottery winners tide.
I am your ugly frog you lovingly kissed.
Turning into that handsome dream Prince.
How Nice To Be A Naughty Frog!

You treasure my sexy body essences pure.
Charming love pleasures divine for sure.
Our body odours sing affectionate songs.
Paradise concealed in your legs so strong.
How Nice To Be A Naughty Frog!

A stream flowing in paradise lasting forever.
Dashing country pursuits seeking pleasure.
Making love with an handsome Frog dear.
Your naked beauty outstanding and clear.
How Nice To Be A Naughty Frog!

Your tadpole eggs wriggling inside I adore.
Giggle on that dream cloud with you amore.
Pleasures amongst fragrant flowers all fun.
Under golden lightning of that sinking sun.
How Nice To Be A Naughty Frog!

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this one was a good (Score: 1 )
by mamta on Monday, May 19, 2008 (05:06:48)

this one was a good read. nice pace and flow

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Re: How Nice To Be A Naughty Frog! (Score: 1 )
by zhaul on Wednesday, July 08, 2009 (00:39:07)

a very original idea for a love poem or erotic poem, however recalling a phrase I read here somewhere, "A poem is never finished, only abandoned" I think you abandoned it to soon. There are a few lines that fall into cliche that could be change into something more powerful. This was a good read. I think you could try to edit this poem changing some of the phrases, experiment with mew images, I think the idea, original idea "naughty frog" deserves a more vivid and original phrasing.

Cheers

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