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Poems - In the middle of the night
i don't want you ever giving me a score of 10 again , i refuse to write a poem if you ever do so . There are so many other poems which deserve a 9 or 10 , much more . Mine deserves a mere 7 in my opinion and you being a true friend , i hope you of all people will rate my poems so that I can trust your judgement . Now how do I know how my poem measures with the others if you give me a 10 because you feel you shoud stand by your friend ?
I enjoyed the playful nature of this poem, and I don't think it was because I know the way you post. It's an adorable piece, is there a reason you didn't post this in forums? I would have helped you much much much. Do that next time and send me a link to the thread so I can find it, I loose sight of a lot of poems because I don't search avidly. Know that I liked this poem it brought a smile to my face, and it doesn't take a "10" on a poem to do that for me, any poem can bring smiles to peoples faces. T
I really enjoyed this---words, structure- it works!!
a loved the imagery in
"a wild mare hooves at my chest"
ths whole poem is incredibly storng, maintaining the theme and the strong imagery all the way trhough. this is really a fantastic poem.
definately my facvourite of yours so far.
and need a cuddle
I like your poem and I'm a rhymer old timer
so it's a 9.....because of the rhyme
take care, ilan
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