In the middle of the night

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the dawn will always rise little tigger, and all darkness will pass. i've been through the most impenetrable of blackness, but the light will be yours. keep dreaming - love and peace - paul.

the dawn will always (Score: 1 ) by alana on Thursday, May 29, 2008 (07:26:03)

omegapaffy , sweet puppy , i like the fact that you comment on my poems , but the score is too much ,
i don't want you ever giving me a score of 10 again , i refuse to write a poem if you ever do so . There are so many other poems which deserve a 9 or 10 , much more . Mine deserves a mere 7 in my opinion and you being a true friend , i hope you of all people will rate my poems so that I can trust your judgement . Now how do I know how my poem measures with the others if you give me a 10 because you feel you shoud stand by your friend ?


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the dawn will always (Score: 1 ) by omegapaf on Thursday, May 29, 2008 (07:32:47)

how about if i give you 11 out of ten next time tigger ha ha.


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deep mood stomp all the way through..very nice

deep mood stomp all (Score: 1 ) by alana on Thursday, May 29, 2008 (07:27:41)

I will stomp away and never post a poem on this site if you ever give me a 10 again . ROOAAAAAAR! meeeiw meeeiow !


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deep mood stomp all (Score: 1 ) by questionajourney on Thursday, May 29, 2008 (23:36:09)

how about two fives:)


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This is a great reminder of childhood fears! SpooooKy!!!! spence

There are moments were the rhyme scheme breaks, I can take the slight rhyme of "invisible". I'm not sure what form this is, shall we call it the "tigger scheme"
I enjoyed the playful nature of this poem, and I don't think it was because I know the way you post. It's an adorable piece, is there a reason you didn't post this in forums? I would have helped you much much much. Do that next time and send me a link to the thread so I can find it, I loose sight of a lot of poems because I don't search avidly. Know that I liked this poem it brought a smile to my face, and it doesn't take a "10" on a poem to do that for me, any poem can bring smiles to peoples faces. T

liked it

The long journey into darkness......very nice alana.
Cheers......Harry

A great journey into insomnia. If you've been there this all rings true. I had a few difficulties with some of the line transitions and the fact that in S4 L3 there is no rhyme, but really a great poem with descriptions that take you there.

(twig's shadows--needs an apostrophe )

I really enjoyed this---words, structure- it works!!

good writing

So lively style is used.I can see the picture and even feel.Enjoyed.)

my favvourite by far was stanza 3. magnifique alannis.
a loved the imagery in
"a wild mare hooves at my chest"
gold.

ths whole poem is incredibly storng, maintaining the theme and the strong imagery all the way trhough. this is really a fantastic poem.
definately my facvourite of yours so far.

mil/radical_love

Alana I was a bit scared reading this
and need a cuddle

I like your poem and I'm a rhymer old timer
so it's a 9.....because of the rhyme

take care, ilan