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Not So Pretty World

by questionajourney

Two girls were murdered
One suspect on the loose
Still some held signs, saying Forgive
Two moments of silence
One emotion has flourished
Fueling the question-
Why should he live?
Harm to the innocent
so blame needs a home
Society, drugs, lack of gladness
No matter the way
We choose to view it
This world is filled with madness




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Indeed that’s the (Score: 1 )
by moonlighter_angel on Wednesday, June 11, 2008 (03:32:02)
Indeed that’s the cruelty we need to accept in this mad world we live in…yes, sometimes we wonder why after all the havoc happened one still shout for forgiveness--- maybe it’s the last course to find the peace from within. Good write quest! *wink moon

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    Indeed that’s the (Score: 1 )
    by questionajourney on Wednesday, June 11, 2008 (10:31:52)
    hey moon..dearly noted and appreciated...i pondered the idea of peace yesterday..i think i've decided to work on peace in the world first and then the last course mybe is to rest from peace within...i like to think that all have the makings of peace in the soul, but often confusion of a foggy upbringing make it hard to accept in full..i know i love the idea of peace, but i've always had a temper..it wasnt but recently i decided to smile when i get cut off on the road or patient when typical annoyances arise...thanks again to you moon.all the best to you_quest

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I enjoyed the piece (Score: 1 )
by fanniesson on Wednesday, June 11, 2008 (11:44:34)
I enjoyed the piece
I’ve Witten on the same subject
not as good as this though

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    I enjoyed the piece (Score: 1 )
    by questionajourney on Thursday, June 12, 2008 (13:42:00)
    to hear that makes me smile fanniesson...but i have always been quick to stop myself of accepting such compliments..i guess i'm just one of those idiots that can't take a compliment and bask in the meaning...i will say i do appreciate it and hold it dear:) nivek..what was the name of it so i can check it out if I may?

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This hits home, Ques (Score: 1 )
by Ramonez on Thursday, June 12, 2008 (10:08:32)
This hits home, Question, South Africa, that is.
Great piece.

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    This hits home, Ques (Score: 1 )
    by questionajourney on Thursday, June 12, 2008 (13:44:44)
    i send the best of energy from the U.S. your way Ramonez....i hope you and yours are well....thanks for the insight and understanding:) nivek

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