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My eyes opened

by Azaley

Thinking of being without you kills my soul. Never knew I had one until thoughts carried my emotions so far that my chest hurt. I've lost so much more than most and so much less than some, yet the mere thought of losing you hurts far worse than anything I have ever gone through. I don't think you could come close to realizing what you mean to me, things always have a way of becoming clear when they are right in your face. Things became all too clear with a few slight words. Never will I take for granted, not again... I have known since we met that you were all I've had, would ever have. I certainly didn't show it, but I knew. Too many thoughts and dreams traversed through my head. Many equations stepped in the way, threw themselves in the way. It was always you. It will always be you. These words flowing so freely will always sound cliche, will always be words someone else has spoken or written before. No matter to me. I know they will never be meant more than they do now. Whoever reads this, they will become stronger and our love will grow with every word read by every soul that reads them... It's not a question, not a hope, it's that feeling in the pit of your stomach when you just know everything is right. I have a hard time believing that you are real, that you are mine. I'm working on it. As long as you know that for every ounce of trying you put in, you will get twice as much back. Still Not completely sure you exist so I wont open my eyes, not just yet...





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different...your rea (Score: 1 )
by Dreaming-Demon on Tuesday, October 28, 2008 (12:31:59)
different...your really in love with this person...if he exists....another nicely expressed write

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    different...your rea (Score: 1 )
    by Azaley on Saturday, November 01, 2008 (06:10:56)
    Thanks very much for all your kind responses... This poem was a dream I had.

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awesome! (Score: 1 )
by waracer on Thursday, January 15, 2009 (22:10:56)
awesome!

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Re: My eyes opened (Score: 1 )
by PTROCK4950 on Monday, March 05, 2012 (12:39:07)
Beautiful expression! Never gets old.

Cheers.

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