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You are completely anhedonic.

by Zeao

It’s the moment, when you feel it all.
The day when you look at your life,
And phases like “C’est la vie” mean nothing.

When the comfort of loved ones means so little,
And all your favorite hobbies and past times,
Are simply gathering dust on your shelf.

It’s the glimpses of your past,
That you hold onto so you can remember,
You were once human.

It’s the scars on your body, that tell a story
Of a person who once felt the pain of sacrifice,
The honor of a good deed.

It’s the fleeting memory of happiness,
It’s the dying of love.
It’s you.

You are completely anhedonic.

//Not the greatest thing I've wrote, but though I should post it anyways//




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Actually I really li (Score: 1 )
by Dreaming-Demon on Friday, October 31, 2008 (11:41:08)
Actually I really liked this....sad in a way..thinkin about...nicely done

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    Actually I really li (Score: 1 )
    by Zeao on Friday, October 31, 2008 (11:56:14)
    ...Thank you! Very Happy I really didn't think it was too well constructed, but I guess everyone would have different opinions on things - and I'm glad for that, because if they didn't you wouldn't have made me smile Very Happy

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Nice Jon (Score: 1 )
by schlegel on Wednesday, March 25, 2009 (20:26:34)
Nice Jon

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    Nice Jon (Score: 1 )
    by Zeao on Wednesday, March 25, 2009 (22:37:09)
    thanks! ~Z

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