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Wow… what a splendid poem my friend, so heartfelt … amazed… Maya

Wow… what a splend (Score: 1 ) by Leggolas on Saturday, January 03, 2009 (15:07:38)

Maya, the words are indeed heartfelt. Fondest Regards. Mark.


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Ok ,you talked me into it.. I will run away with you.. lol, Mark this is beautiful, sentimental and I think I shall swoon... Gee , my friend how can you not be taken already or are you and I just don't know it?? My husband is standing here laughing at my words.. He will have to step up to the plate now and win my love back...your bud Melly

Ok ,you talked me in (Score: 1 ) by Leggolas on Saturday, January 03, 2009 (16:17:43)

LOL. Hey! He's not on his way round to my house to sort me out is he? Remember! I'm a poet not a pugilist. LOL. Thanks for the wonderful comment. Fond Regards. Mark. Say! are those knees still weak LOL.


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Ok ,you talked me in (Score: 1 ) by Melly on Saturday, January 03, 2009 (18:53:25)

Darn right they are.. hugs melly


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Who am I to refuse hen put to me this way.Legolass, a splendid display of wooing at it's best. This has started the year off very well for me.......... I think we are in for a real treat from you this year.Hugs,Helen

Who am I to refuse h (Score: 1 ) by Leggolas on Monday, January 05, 2009 (09:06:21)

Dear Helen, I'm glad you enjoyed. Thanks for your inspirational comments. They are much appreciated. Fond Regards. Mark.


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G'day Mark...
What a beaut love poem to read Mark. I'm sure the lucky recipient will be swooning. You've done a bloody goodjob here mate.

Lindsay

G'day Mark... What (Score: 1 ) by Leggolas on Monday, January 05, 2009 (09:13:06)

Dear Lindsay, thank you for your inspiring comments. This was written from the heart. Fond Regards. Mark.


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Well done my friend......Dr.Anant

Well done my friend. (Score: 1 ) by Leggolas on Monday, January 05, 2009 (09:14:25)

Dear Dr Anant, thank you for your comment, it is much appreciated. Regards. Leggolas.


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It's poetry like this that melts my butter, loved it Mark.

It's poetry like thi (Score: 1 ) by Leggolas on Monday, January 05, 2009 (09:17:44)

Dear Temptress, I've not melted anybody's butter before. lol. Accolade indeed. Thanks for your comments my friend. Fond Regards. Mark.


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Hey now!

I'm zoomed, wooned, and cooned:P
my feet are running like Marvin Martians,
oooop's wait a min...where is it you said you lived

Awwwh, seriously Mark,
beautiful display of love and compassion.
You just keep getting better and better each and every time my friend. You'll have no props slamming me next time...."hey wait a min!" I mean in the poems, lol, lol,,lol:P

Hey now! I'm zoom (Score: 1 ) by Leggolas on Monday, January 05, 2009 (09:39:25)

LOL. Dear Noden, not quite sure who Marvin Martians is, but I take it his feet were slick. LOL. Thanks for your inspiring and humerous words my friend. As ever, they are much appreciated. Fond Regards. Mark.


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Leggolas,

This is so romantic and heartfelt. Lucky the lassy recipient....if so...definite swoon material..
Rhoda

Leggolas, This is (Score: 1 ) by Leggolas on Monday, January 05, 2009 (09:47:41)

Dear Rhoda, thank you for your inspiring comments. They are very much appreciated. Fond Regards. Mark.


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Really enjoyed reading this. Definately romantic stuff. Angel

Really enjoyed readi (Score: 1 ) by Leggolas on Monday, January 05, 2009 (09:49:01)

Dear Angel21, so glad you enjoyed reading this. Your comment is much appreciated. Fond Regards. Leggolas.


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very nice...my sentiments exactly...lol...TC

very nice...my senti (Score: 1 ) by Leggolas on Monday, January 05, 2009 (09:50:33)

Dear Thunderchief, so glad you enjoyed, thank you for your comments my friend. Fond Regards. Mark.


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Jeez, Leggolas. Whoever this is for, is a lucky person. I'm not into the love poetry thing at all, but this poem is really something. You just keep getting better and better. However, I found 'my eyes that burn with radiant blue' a bit much (but that's just me, I'm sure

All the best for the new year, mate. Keep writing.

Jeez, Leggolas. Whoe (Score: 1 ) by Leggolas on Monday, January 05, 2009 (09:53:24)

Dear Ramonez, the fact you are not into Love poetry, yet this poem impacted upon you is true tribute indeed. Thank you my friend for your inspiring words. Take care. Fond Regards. Leggolas.


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Oh Mark, comforting and heartwarming are the words that come to mind, though there is far more to this beautiful piece. Truly an enjoyable read. Best wishes, Mary Ann

Oh Mark, comforting (Score: 1 ) by Leggolas on Tuesday, January 06, 2009 (06:09:16)

Dear Mary Ann, your words are inspiring and inciteful. As ever they are much appreciated. Thank you my friend. Fond Regards. Mark.


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Love poems are by far the most difficult to write Mark.......because they can soon turn into a 'Greeting Card'.......you are the master at them my friend.......truly beautiful.
Cheers from your Aussie mate......Harry

Love poems are by fa (Score: 1 ) by Leggolas on Friday, January 09, 2009 (20:10:49)

Dear Harry, you pay me the ultimate compliment and I truly appreciate that which you bestow. It means a lot to me my friend. Fond Regards. Mark.


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Beautiful poem Leggolas...well written...definetly a fave

Beautiful poem Leggo (Score: 1 ) by Leggolas on Friday, January 09, 2009 (20:12:31)

Dear Dreaming-Demon, your words are most kind and very much appreciated. Thank you my friend. Take care. Fond Regards. Mark.


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Wow a real hero! So can you be....? LOL This is great Mark!

Wow a real hero! So (Score: 1 ) by Leggolas on Monday, January 12, 2009 (09:55:44)

Dear sweetsmilingangel, ? LOL, so glad you loved this poem, thanks for the comment. Much appreciated my friend. Fond Regards. Mark.


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Wow, I love the emotional rhyme scheme here... Great work!
~Alexz

Wow, I love the emot (Score: 1 ) by Leggolas on Monday, January 12, 2009 (12:51:58)

Dear Alexz345, thankyou for your complimentary and inspiring comments. They are much appreciated. Fond Regards. Leggolas.


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Love, love, you can blind a 20/20 vision, can palpitate a calm heart, and indeed you conquer all--- you turned Mr. Legge to a full blown Shakespeare in love for you capture him in his most vulnerable part *wink *wink….moon

Love, love, you can (Score: 1 ) by Leggolas on Saturday, January 17, 2009 (12:55:14)

Dear Moon, you pay me the ultimate tribute with your kind words. Thank you my friend. *Winkety *Wink. Fond Regards. Mark.


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nice and very interesting rhyme scheme here. whoever you are poet, enjoyed this one - heartfelt.

nice and very intere (Score: 1 ) by Leggolas on Monday, January 19, 2009 (09:53:41)

Dear Mamta, it's me, it's me. LOL. I presume this was a blind date, I mean rate LOL. That makes your comments all the more special. Thank you my friend. Fond Regards. Mark.


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Top notch stuff. Hooked from the first line.
One to peruse with pleasure.

Top notch stuff. Hoo (Score: 1 ) by Leggolas on Tuesday, January 20, 2009 (04:47:59)

Dear poetpaul, your compliments are tribute indeed and much appreciated. Fond Regards. Leggolas.


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ab fab ~sabre

ab fab ~sabre (Score: 1 ) by Leggolas on Monday, February 02, 2009 (09:26:17)

Thanks for the complimentary comment my friend, as ever, it is much appreciated. Fond Regards. Mark.


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perfect !!!

thanks for the " chicken "greeting

perfect !!! thank (Score: 1 ) by Leggolas on Monday, February 23, 2009 (16:05:52)

Thanks for compliment my friend. Cockadoodledoooooo!


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Leggolas, what a beautiful poem you've written about love. I enjoyed it so much and it had such a nice cadence to it. Thanks for the sweet read.
Julie

Leggolas, what a bea (Score: 1 ) by Leggolas on Monday, March 02, 2009 (15:57:57)

Dear Julie, thankyou for your complimentary comment, it is much appreciated. Fond Regards. Leggolas.


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Beautifully written!
So much passion, lucky girl

Re: Let me be (Score: 1 ) by Leggolas on Thursday, July 09, 2009 (17:30:52)

Dear sosoftly, thank you so much for your beautiful comment, it is truly appreciated. Fond Regards. Mark


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A great work... That when all is said and done says... I love you with using the common word... LOVE... Only once... Powerful poem......

Re: Let me be (Score: 1 ) by Leggolas on Saturday, August 08, 2009 (04:05:35)

Dear BrokenWordsPoet, thankyou so much for your complimentary comment, it is much appreciated. I am so pleased you found 'Let me be' so powerful, for that is true accolade indeed. Fond Regards. Mark


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Re: Let me be (Score: 1 ) by BrokenWordsPoet on Saturday, August 08, 2009 (09:25:04)

Well done...


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I just found this in a slam final (right where it should be). It just awesome. Such an honest and tender piece - you make me feel like I am a Neanderthal or something. There is no pulling a woman into the cave going on here - it is just utter romantic bliss.

Re: Let me be (Score: 1 ) by Leggolas on Thursday, September 03, 2009 (09:29:29)

Dear Ridge, thank you so much for comment, it is much appreciated and I'm so glad you enjoyed. Fond Regards. Mark.


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when i first read this in the slams i was so impressed and reading over it again it fails to lose its lustre. what a poem. truly a splendid write. take good care, conor

Re: Let me be (Score: 1 ) by Leggolas on Sunday, October 25, 2009 (13:58:12)

Thank you conor for your inspiring words, they are much appreciated. Fond Regards. Mark.


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WOW!!!!!!! That's AWESOME!!!!!!!! You're a really great writer!!!!!!

Re: Let me be (Score: 1 ) by Leggolas on Friday, October 30, 2009 (17:52:44)

Thank you so much xxDragonEmoxx, your compliments are very much appreciated. I'm so very glad you enjoyed. Fond Regards. Mark.


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Re: Let me be (Score: 1 ) by xxDragonEmoxx on Friday, October 30, 2009 (18:53:49)

No prob!!!!!!


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This is a beautiful poem Leggolas and the scores do not go high enough for it.

Re: Let me be (Score: 1 ) by Leggolas on Sunday, November 01, 2009 (15:35:45)

Dear defiance, thank you for such a splendid compliment, your comment is truly appreciated. Fond Regards. Mark.


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If a man gave me a poem like that I'd ask, "When's the wedding?"

Re: Let me be (Score: 1 ) by Leggolas on Sunday, November 01, 2009 (15:38:16)

LOL! Dear scriptum, you made me seriously laugh out loud, thanks for such a great comment, I'll see you at the church LOL. Fond Regards. Mark


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Re: Let me be (Score: 1 ) by scriptum on Monday, November 02, 2009 (10:00:36)

oooh, baby!
Query: Why, pray tell, are you not writing? Your submissions are too few and far between. I know this because I watch. Are you in a rut, perhaps?


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Re: Let me be (Score: 1 ) by scriptum on Monday, November 02, 2009 (11:33:36)

Busy, huh? PM rec'd and replied.


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I cant think of Anyone who wouldn't fall for that! I think we all go through life waiting for those words! I don't think many people are capable of bringing them with such flair though.. Unfortunately... Beautiful.
Eva

Re: Let me be (Score: 1 ) by Leggolas on Saturday, November 21, 2009 (08:18:06)

Dear Eva, thank you so much for your complimentary words, they are truly appreciated, I'm so glad they had such an affect upon you. Fond Regards. Mark.


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I love how you repeat certain words for emphasis. Good visuals and words bring in the poems essence.

Re: Let me be (Score: 1 ) by Leggolas on Sunday, January 10, 2010 (17:27:35)

Simply!, this poem was written to say, Let me be everything that you desire. I'm glad you enjoyed it my friend. Your comment is much appreciated. Regards. Leggolas.


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I enjoyed reading your Poem. Very nice and well done for writing
a Poem that come from your heart.

Re: Let me be (Score: 1 ) by Leggolas on Friday, January 15, 2010 (18:11:52)

The words certainly did flow from the heart. I'm glad you enjoyed Daniel. Regards. Leggolas


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This is a marvelous poem of wanting to give everything to the one you love.

Re: Let me be (Score: 1 ) by Leggolas on Friday, January 29, 2010 (18:07:51)

Indeed, that was the poem's intent my friend. Thank you for your comment, it is much appreciated. Fond Regards. Leggolas.


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A comforting poem Indeed - May we all
meet such a person who
says " let me be"

ilan

Re: Let me be (Score: 1 ) by Leggolas on Saturday, February 13, 2010 (10:03:40)

Dear Ilan, it would indeed be ideal if reciprocal. Thanks for the comment my friend. Fond Regards. Mark.


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I love any poem that makes good use of slant rhyme. You have the knack.

Re: Let me be (Score: 1 ) by Leggolas on Saturday, February 13, 2010 (10:04:53)

So glad you enjoyed Lance. Thanks for the comment, it is much appreciated. Regards. Leggolas.


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Wow, who is this person you want to want you so bad.
you seem to be very mcuh set on this person to allow you into their life. just go out and grab it, that's all you can do.

I can identify so well with this - Magnificent!
thanks for sharing!

Re: Let me be (Score: 1 ) by Leggolas on Tuesday, February 23, 2010 (06:51:52)

It was a past Love Daniel.

Thankyou for your inspiring words my friend, they are truly appreciated. Fond Regards. Mark.


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Rhyme is inconsistent,as is the punctuation. Good start for a poem.

Re: Let me be (Score: 1 ) by Leggolas on Thursday, March 18, 2010 (18:55:48)

LOL! I feel the most disappointing aspect of yet another of your negative comments is the lack of constructive vocabulary. I would have expected you, as a Curator of GotPoetry, to bring something containing more substance to the poetic table, a phonetic feast, a veritable banquet of creativity, infusing exquisite flavour to the poems content. Alas! I fear, such can never be, for yours, I feel, is a palate far too bitter in it's taste.


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Dear Mark,

Such tender wooing words and as a woman, this write speaks to my soul. This is the secret desire of the heart of a woman. My favorite words:

'the soft caress
the sedative that nullifies your pain.'

Oh how soothing, beautiful, just beautiful. I feel safe just reading this piece.

Yours Truly,

Tinker

Re: Let me be (Score: 1 ) by Leggolas on Wednesday, April 07, 2010 (18:38:10)

Dear Amy, may its soft caress wrap you in a blanket of tranquility. Fond Regards.
Mark


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Mark! Mark! Wherefore art thou Mark?!?

Absolutely splendid. I truly enjoyed reading this piece Mark, and I am left in awe (maybe even in love?) You are absolutely amazing my friend. It is always a pleasure reading your work, as it always leaves a lasting impression. Thanks for sharing your wonderful gift of expression.

~Camille

Re: Let me be (Score: 1 ) by Leggolas on Tuesday, April 27, 2010 (08:26:52)

I'm here, I'm here LOL
Dear Camille, I'm so very glad that this poem inspired such within. Thankyou for your comment, it is, as ever, truly appreciated. Fond Regards. Mark


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Excellent Write!!
This one is my Favorite of yours so far!!

Re: Let me be (Score: 1 ) by Leggolas on Saturday, June 05, 2010 (08:54:45)

Dear PrincessCoffee, thankyou for the compliment it is much appreciated, I'm so glad you enjoyed Fond Regards. Leggolas.


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Ahhhh...beautiful, simply and truly poetic love

Re: Let me be (Score: 1 ) by Leggolas on Monday, June 07, 2010 (06:56:12)

Thankyou CShore, your comment is truly inspiring Fond Regards. Leggolas.


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Just Beautiful

Re: Let me be (Score: 1 ) by Leggolas on Thursday, July 22, 2010 (17:44:50)

Thankyou ScorpioSting, I'm so glad you enjoyed Fond Regards. Leggolas.


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this is a really touching piece of art... It really makes me think of how the one you love is supposed to treat you... ill give it a 10 star!!!!!!!! you have a really good way of putting your words together!!!!

Re: Let me be (Score: 1 ) by Leggolas on Saturday, July 31, 2010 (18:32:17)

Thankyou Heretta, I'm glad this piece affected you thus. Your comment is much appreciated. Fond Regards. Leggolas.


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Cool Love Poem Leggolas. vanmanfury.

Re: Let me be (Score: 1 ) by Leggolas on Saturday, August 28, 2010 (10:46:02)

Dear vanmanfury, thanks for your comment, it is much appreciated, I'm so glad you enjoyed. Fond Regards. Leggolas.


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Every line, just exudes passion for you art, every line, is a story in it's self to meditate on, and reflect. Like all true, great artists, you are able, to see what others, cannot, making them able, by painting such wonderful images, in their minds, to coin a extract from one of my own poems. You say, what we would all like to say, but, can't find the words. and have reached the pinnacle, of this craft, with flying colours. Take care Mark. You always amaze me.and inspire to, create, abate not as eloquent as yourself. Pete. Tyger Tyger. LOL .

Re: Let me be (Score: 1 ) by Leggolas on Wednesday, September 01, 2010 (15:56:08)

Dear Pete, thankyou so much for your inspirational words, they are truly appreciated and I'm so glad you enjoyed. Fond Regards. Mark.


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oohh i love this the words the flow i mean just everything is awesome

warm regards
karishma

Re: Let me be (Score: 1 ) by Leggolas on Friday, September 10, 2010 (17:05:35)

Dear karishma, thankyou for your inspiring words, they are truly appreciated and I'm so glad you enjoyed. Fond Regards. Mark.


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this touched my heart very much so. I enjoyed this. Makes me want to have joy in my life again.

Re: Let me be (Score: 1 ) by Leggolas on Tuesday, September 14, 2010 (13:39:44)

Dear Harmonie, I'm so very glad this touched you so, and for it to have inspired such a desire is truly rewarding for me Thankyou for your inspiring words, they are truly appreciated. Fond Regards. Leggolas.


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i ran across in the slam! and i love it my friend a fav for me. so very heartfelt. your words are so sweet.
well done and have a great day!
<3Angela<3

Re: Let me be (Score: 1 ) by Leggolas on Saturday, September 25, 2010 (11:54:01)

Dear Angela, I'm so glad you love this poem so. Your comment is truly appreciated. Fond Regards. Mark.


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Very powerful. I wish I had that flare with words.

Re: Let me be (Score: 1 ) by Leggolas on Sunday, October 10, 2010 (11:47:35)

Dear ean, I'm so very glad such was evoked for you. Thankyou for your comment, it is much appreciated. Regards. Leggolas.


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Mark, this write is just beautiful. So tender and sweet...
the love, the comforting and caring ...so apparent. She is a luck lady, and you have written for her, so well.
I seem to remember that someone commented "the radiant blue eyes" was a bit too much........I say to each his own!

~~JoAn

Smiles are contagious

Re: Let me be (Score: 1 ) by Leggolas on Friday, October 22, 2010 (18:44:04)

Dear JoAn, thankyou for your beautiful comment, it is truly appreciated. Fond Regards. Mark.


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'the sedative that nullifies your pain'...oh what a line!
Isn't that what we all long for? How beautifully written.

Re: Let me be (Score: 1 ) by Leggolas on Friday, October 22, 2010 (18:46:17)

Dear gottawrite, thankyou for your words of inspiration, I'm so very glad you enjoyed. Fond Regards. Leggolas.


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Wow! I love it.... there isnt words otherwise. I just love it.
Very awesome write. its a favorite

Re: Let me be (Score: 1 ) by Leggolas on Saturday, October 30, 2010 (06:44:36)

Dear Candace, I'm so very glad you enjoyed. Fond Regards. Leggolas.


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this poem is beautiful, im glad i decided to read your poetry! can't wait to read more!

Re: Let me be (Score: 1 ) by Leggolas on Saturday, October 30, 2010 (06:46:02)

Dear Karen, thankyou for your comment, it is truly appreciated. Fond Regards. Leggolas.


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oh this is nice this is nice this flows so freely so easy like butter man nice read mark really so eloquent you sure do put create wonders with that pen she must be one heck of a woman.

Re: Let me be (Score: 1 ) by Leggolas on Thursday, November 25, 2010 (18:33:12)

Dear Brodie, thankyou for your comment, it is much appreciated. Fond Regards. Mark.


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Re: Let me be (Score: 1 ) by SEVER on Thursday, November 25, 2010 (21:33:31)

No Problem my friend take care.


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I really like this...
I'm just curious - why is Swollen Smoulder capitalized?

Re: Let me be (Score: 1 ) by Leggolas on Wednesday, January 12, 2011 (19:48:30)

I'm glad such is so and that it stirred your curiosity. The answer to your question is ~ purely for intimate emphasis. Thankyou for your comment, it is truly appreciated. Fond Regards. Leggolas.


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I would say this is one of those ageless romantic pieces that will survive anything.

Re: Let me be (Score: 1 ) by Leggolas on Monday, February 21, 2011 (11:46:07)

Thankyou so much for your inspiring words Mercia, they are truly appreciated. Fond Regards. Leggolas.


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This is a sweet poem, and very lovely!

lilbadu

Re: Let me be (Score: 1 ) by Leggolas on Monday, March 07, 2011 (15:25:20)

Thankyou lilbadu, I'm so very glad you enjoyed
Fond Regards. Leggolas.


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Im going to have to follow the crowed and tell you it was a great read thank you ....blissment

Re: Let me be (Score: 1 ) by Leggolas on Monday, March 28, 2011 (15:38:45)

Thankyou Kyle, I'm so glad you enjoyed. Fond Regards. Leggolas.


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A rather sweet write, as always great use of words. Really enjoyed it.
Take care.

Re: Let me be (Score: 1 ) by Leggolas on Sunday, April 10, 2011 (14:50:18)

I'm glad you found such to be so Pete. Your comment, as ever, is truly appreciated. Fond Regards. Mark.


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one truly need sm1 in their life who'd b there to remind wht happiness is at bolt times; wht smile is whn tear slides; wht love is whn hate resides.
an amazing poem..., a poem abt sm1 who has dat special prsn in their life

Re: Let me be (Score: 1 ) by Leggolas on Friday, May 06, 2011 (19:18:15)

Thankyou for your comment Titiksha, it is much appreciated. Fond Regards. Leggolas.


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Really you know, your poems are just full of a rhythm...a unique rhythm. It was splendid! It seemed as I just kept on floating in the rhythm you created!

Love,
Titiksha

Re: Let me be (Score: 1 ) by Leggolas on Sunday, June 19, 2011 (06:42:19)

Dear Titiksha, thankyou for such a wonderfully inspiring comment, you've made my day. Fond Regards. Leggolas


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sad to award 10 only as there's no other option...and sad to admit my hands are so empty of words ...can simply say... it is a work to stay in mind for long...regards...

let me add my wow to other wows in the comments on this amazing and beautiful poem.