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Exposed Seclusion

by Alexz345

Critical of others, she stands alone
Crying in darkness, a stoic tone
Only to forget what she has done
Only to forget who she has shun

Hopeless love, no one around
Deceased trust, which she has drowned
Starving on what she didn’t deserve
Starving on this desperate curve

Still, she lives with her delusions
Pretending on these exposed seclusions
Begging for shreds of bitter taste
Begging for scraps of previous haste

Fear revived, the past exposed
Suffer for the mistakes she chose
Second thoughts of the life we share
Second thoughts about whom we care





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Good tempo and rhyme (Score: 1 )
by TheBohemian on Monday, January 19, 2009 (15:20:21)
Good tempo and rhyme. I especially like the first stanza.

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    Good tempo and rhyme (Score: 1 )
    by Alexz345 on Monday, January 19, 2009 (15:29:42)
    Thanks Bohemian!
    ~Alexz

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