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Poems - The Dream

The Dream

by orangetulips12

music playing, soft jazz

the beat release my soul

you grasp my hand

gentle entice me toward you

we danced as if we were one

the kiss on the cheek

making sandcastle and

walking on the warm summer sands

standing hand and hand on the

shore of East Point Beach

in the distance a fog horn sounds

not knowing it was the alarm clock

if you are just a dream

don’t wake me

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What a beautiful sce (Score: 1 )
by Chelle_Yve on Tuesday, April 10, 2007 (11:19:42)

What a beautiful scene you conjure with your words!

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What a beautiful sce (Score: 1 )
by orangetulips12 on Wednesday, April 11, 2007 (13:07:25)

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so so nice. lovely u (Score: 1 )
by mamta on Thursday, April 26, 2007 (01:23:45)

so so nice. lovely use of words.

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so so nice. lovely u (Score: 1 )
by orangetulips12 on Thursday, June 28, 2007 (17:20:40)

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Lovely imagery...but (Score: 1 )
by Nolip on Wednesday, June 27, 2007 (14:00:30)

Lovely imagery...but didn't you mean to write "entice me toward you" and not "entice my toward you"?

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Lovely imagery...but (Score: 1 )
by orangetulips12 on Thursday, June 28, 2007 (17:20:20)

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