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Lightning Bug

by Melly

A shot in the dark
Camera bug snaps
Click, Click, Click




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i knew it was lighti (Score: 1 )
by omegapaf on Wednesday, May 06, 2009 (19:58:10)
i knew it was lighting bugs that ran camera's. all that electronic stuff, was just a load of hooey ha ha - click click moo - paul.

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    i knew it was lighti (Score: 1 )
    by Melly on Thursday, May 07, 2009 (23:12:18)
    I can't believe you actually got it Paul.. it was so far out there.. It takes a special mind honey and I think your the only one to venture there.. Hugs and laughs Melly

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A clever little senr (Score: 1 )
by badmalthus on Friday, May 22, 2009 (01:11:27)
A clever little senryu Melly.
Cheers.......Harry

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    A clever little senr (Score: 1 )
    by Melly on Friday, May 22, 2009 (23:31:28)
    Thank you Harry. Them lightning bugs are funny little creatures and I was wondering if I should change the title as I thouhgt maybe it was a little hard to understand the meaning. Ha! Hugs Melly

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Re: Lightning Bug (Score: 1 )
by Zbird on Tuesday, June 16, 2009 (10:42:50)
I can't believe I got so busy with other things I forgot to rate some of my buddies poems! eeek! This one is wonderful! That is exactly what it looks like when the lightning bugs are out at night and I never even thought of it until you posted this. Did you every catch them in a jar when you were a kid?

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    Re: Lightning Bug (Score: 1 )
    by Melly on Tuesday, June 16, 2009 (19:29:30)
    I know I had to change the title to lightning bug because only Paul got the drift. My husband said they were like little flash cameras going off all over the place.. Thats where I got the idea.. You know I couldn't catch lightning bugs in a jar silly I can't see but I used to hold the jars for my brothers and listen to the bugs sing.. I bet you didn't know that they have a voice. lol Melly

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      Re: Lightning Bug (Score: 1 )
      by Zbird on Wednesday, June 17, 2009 (08:42:22)
      OMG! Melly, yes, I do forget you can't see! You remind me of a friend of mine who spent his life in a wheelchair. He was so unhandicapped that I would often forget he couldn't walk!

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Re: Lightning Bug (Score: 1 )
by CRUSH-247 on Sunday, October 25, 2009 (08:34:20)
Wonderful melly... Very Happy

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    Re: Lightning Bug (Score: 1 )
    by Melly on Sunday, October 25, 2009 (14:51:27)
    Thank you crush. You are too sweet. Hugs Melly

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Re: Lightning Bug (Score: 1 )
by immastar on Sunday, October 25, 2009 (09:19:24)
Great imagery.

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    Re: Lightning Bug (Score: 1 )
    by Melly on Sunday, October 25, 2009 (14:52:56)
    Thank you darlin Mastar. By the way what kind of name is that??Hugs melly

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      Re: Lightning Bug (Score: 1 )
      by immastar on Sunday, October 25, 2009 (18:04:30)
      Sorry to be so confusing...it's supposed to read I'm A Star Very Happy
      Hope that helps Cool

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