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Poems - Feel the music

Feel the music

by angelsfall2

Birds singing so sweet
Let the notes sore ever deep
To hearts that can weep

Haiku L.S. 08/09

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Re: Feel the music (Score: 1 )
by WmAMlr on Friday, August 14, 2009 (18:32:37)

Very good sweety Mahw

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Re: Feel the music (Score: 1 )
by angelsfall2 on Saturday, August 15, 2009 (03:02:22)

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Re: Feel the music (Score: 1 )
by WHMechem on Sunday, August 16, 2009 (00:58:34)

I like it a lot. The punctuation gets in the way of the flow.

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Re: Feel the music (Score: 1 )
by angelsfall2 on Tuesday, August 18, 2009 (08:33:18)

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Re: Feel the music (Score: 1 )
by angeroseblue on Sunday, August 16, 2009 (02:43:39)

very nice angels
so pretty

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Re: Feel the music (Score: 1 )
by angelsfall2 on Tuesday, August 18, 2009 (08:35:16)

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Re: Feel the music (Score: 1 )
by Brennan on Monday, September 28, 2009 (07:55:37)

I'll admit some haiku's can go too far and just confuse.

but this was perfect.. good ryhme and it said so much in so little.

a perfect example of a great haiku Smile

defo a fave

Bren

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Re: Feel the music (Score: 1 )
by angelsfall2 on Monday, September 28, 2009 (20:43:20)

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Re: Feel the music (Score: 1 )
by Brennan on Tuesday, September 29, 2009 (03:59:24)

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Re: Feel the music (Score: 1 )
by angelsfall2 on Wednesday, January 06, 2010 (15:56:19)

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