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Oh Gail Come ON!

by butterflyzrfree

Perky Paul Patiently produces placement putting particular products into pot potions.
While Weak William wonders when Perky Paul will win,
Queer Quenda quickly quotes what William quailed quietly.
Somnolent Susana stops singing and says silly sayings. Still, Queer Quenda surrupticisously survives.
Since Sordid Sarah stops suddenly saying stupid sick stuff about Somnolent Susana,
Hardy Harry hangs his head having had horrible hangovers from Sordid Sarah's horrors.
Jerky Jasper jolts Hardy Harry jumping joyfully in jest.
Amd Dumb Danny denies doing dangerous daring deeds delayed down Drury Drive.
Then Danny, Jasper, Sarah, Susana, Quenda, William, and Paul have a pot party at sunrise.
That's it!




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Re: Oh Gail Come ON! (Score: 1 )
by thewholesoul on Thursday, August 27, 2009 (11:49:24)
This was well put together Gail and a funny read. "Queer Qenda" "Dumb Danny" but my favourite was "Sordid Sarah" hahah.
I think I have dated a few of those back in the day.

(is there supposed to be 2 "when"s in line 2?)

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    Re: Oh Gail Come ON! (Score: 1 )
    by butterflyzrfree on Thursday, August 27, 2009 (12:23:10)
    Thanks for responding and no there's not, I will fixy it.

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Re: Oh Gail Come ON! (Score: 1 )
by angeroseblue on Thursday, August 27, 2009 (13:28:58)
Very Happy Shocked Laughing
its a wonder your eyes didn't get crossed as you wrote this
Gail
my goodness
but i have to say
i fav this because its a challenge to get through

so (drum roll please....10 it is Laughing Laughing )

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    Re: Oh Gail Come ON! (Score: 1 )
    by butterflyzrfree on Thursday, August 27, 2009 (21:26:13)
    Thanks you..I hardly think I deserve it! My question to you is: do you think I should list it under 'funny poems" or remove the word "pot" from the last line and put it under 'youth poetry' as a tongue twister?

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      Re: Oh Gail Come ON! (Score: 1 )
      by angeroseblue on Thursday, August 27, 2009 (21:44:28)
      you are welcome
      and yes you do deserve it

      it would be a nice youth poem if you took out pot
      its funny as well ....

      its your choice Gail...i wouldn't dare
      but i can say i am glad i found it Wink Very Happy

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Re: Oh Gail Come ON! (Score: 1 )
by liarbird on Thursday, August 27, 2009 (21:27:13)
G'day Gail...
When a poem is different, humorous and has the ability to entertain an audience, then you have written something very special. Gail, you would hold an audience in the palm of your hands with this poem.
Well done

Lindsay

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    Re: Oh Gail Come ON! (Score: 1 )
    by butterflyzrfree on Thursday, August 27, 2009 (22:05:19)
    Haha! Thanks Lindsay! That would only be if I could recite this tongue twister from beginning to end without taking a breath! Laughing No easy feat, that!

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Re: Oh Gail Come ON! (Score: 1 )
by jhcamero on Saturday, August 29, 2009 (11:09:51)
crap girl... that is a mouth full haha

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    Re: Oh Gail Come ON! (Score: 1 )
    by butterflyzrfree on Saturday, August 29, 2009 (13:55:00)
    Can you say it three times fast? Haha!
    Thanks for the reading and the comment!

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Re: Oh Gail Come ON! (Score: 1 )
by omegapaf on Saturday, August 29, 2009 (22:19:45)
higgledy piggledy paul, and wiggly waggly pup like this one gail - pre procrastinating proletariat - paul.

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    Re: Oh Gail Come ON! (Score: 1 )
    by butterflyzrfree on Sunday, August 30, 2009 (12:44:43)
    Yes, that is basically is all I did. To me, it was a super easy one to write, if one is feeling silly enough! Thanks Paul, Gail

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Re: Oh Gail Come ON! (Score: 1 )
by stillhere2008 on Friday, October 16, 2009 (19:37:43)
oh my makes me dizzy just thinking the time you had to taken to do this.. good work

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    Re: Oh Gail Come ON! (Score: 1 )
    by butterflyzrfree on Friday, October 16, 2009 (22:33:58)
    Hi Alma! I love when you comment on my poems! I have seen you busy with the slams, or maybe the slams are busy for you! Some of the slams that are posted now, have been pending for months! Glad Melly is back to make the effort to get them started! Anyway, thanks for the compliment! I bet you don't want to live around MY house full of teenagers and Chris Rock! Gail

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      Re: Oh Gail Come ON! (Score: 1 )
      by butterflyzrfree on Friday, October 16, 2009 (22:37:56)
      Oh, I thought you were commenting on, 'Don't Show this one to your Parents!" I got confused. But I checked this one, and yes, it was quite a challenge! and thanks. Very confused gail...

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