THE DD BIRD BAND

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this tells a story inside a story
if I may I would like to copy it and put it in
a frame but only with your permissiom
and your name on the bottom of it thanks mtpoet

Re: THE DD BIRD BAND (Score: 1 ) by dav.smith on Tuesday, September 15, 2009 (05:49:07)

MTP, You may copy and frame it as many times as you like. Wow, Framed. I give you permission to copy any one you like. daVE


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Nice one dAVE.

I’ve had the pleasure of knowing a few aspiring musicians myself...great ending.

“ Lionheart
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Re: THE DD BIRD BAND (Score: 1 ) by dav.smith on Wednesday, September 16, 2009 (02:11:44)

Lionheart., your comment is accaepted, We have here in Australia a "Chior Of hard Knocks"., They consist of disabled and down and out kids, They are a marvel to watch. This was the base for my poem. Thanks for enjoying it. dAVE


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Dave-
fantastic!!!!
loved every word- this contained so many stories within it-
only thing typo- acustic is actually spelt acoustic!!!!
unless of course you did this on purpose to add to the fell of the poem.....
yeah, they all sound like prime candidates for the choir of hard knocks- what a great program, it is truly amazing how people can find purpose and meaning in their lives or simply enhance their lives a little by making music.
thanks so much for sharing this
radical-love/millie

Re: THE DD BIRD BAND (Score: 1 ) by dav.smith on Friday, September 18, 2009 (03:57:28)

Sorry a typo it is. Radical, your kind words are greatly accepted. dAVE


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Wooo dAVE! I love this poem, wish I'd seen it the first time around back in September. You've described the members so well I feel like I could hear them play their music. Truly love local bands, Mary Ann

Re: THE DD BIRD BAND (Score: 1 ) by dav.smith on Sunday, January 10, 2010 (03:37:33)

Thank you Mary Ann, it was on of my better poems I must say, I can still remember as a kid, We would make Bass and guitars out of anything we could find. Cheers dAVE


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That was a fun write. I read it out loud and went berserk. LOL LOL.


ROFL

haha

Re: THE DD BIRD BAND (Score: 1 ) by dav.smith on Sunday, January 10, 2010 (03:42:11)

Thanks for delving among the stuff in the attic. Been sitting back there so long forgot all about it, Cheers dAVE


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Wow I love this Dave, so much talent out there, undescoverd. one of the best bands I ever heard was on local radio. A school girl and boy, She played the beats on an old batterd chair found in a junk shop. he guitar. They had a unique sound, kind of bluesy. Never heard of them again. voted for you in the slam. excellent stuff Dave. a 10 and a heart, thanks for the story. Pete. LOL .

Re: THE DD BIRD BAND (Score: 1 ) by dav.smith on Sunday, November 13, 2011 (07:32:25)

Thank you kindly Pete. I have always like the way this poem came out. Cheers and peace be yours. dAVE


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