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Poems - DAY AND NIGHT

DAY AND NIGHT

by dav.smith

Silently night en-wraps day
gently closing down days control
a constant tag game played out for eternity
night setting out her jewels for all to see
knowing that soon enough day will once again reclaim the sky
there is a love shared by both
a soft regard for those that dwell within their realms
the specialties that never over step day and nights boundaries
a balance unequaled.

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Re: DAY AND NIGHT (Score: 1 )
by mamta on Thursday, October 01, 2009 (10:42:51)

this poem evokes a nice feeling but i have not rated it cos there are a few typo errors in this write. i think you should edit them cos they are a bit distracting Razz

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Re: DAY AND NIGHT (Score: 1 )
by dav.smith on Thursday, October 01, 2009 (19:05:13)

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Re: DAY AND NIGHT (Score: 1 )
by Blondie on Friday, October 02, 2009 (22:28:11)

This paints a sensual vision for my eyes, but then again it's almost a full moon!

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Re: DAY AND NIGHT (Score: 1 )
by dav.smith on Friday, October 02, 2009 (22:54:37)

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Re: DAY AND NIGHT (Score: 1 )
by MoZark on Saturday, October 03, 2009 (07:57:04)

Wouldn’t it be nice if people could get along that well? Nicely done.

I have a poem similar on disc that I wrote some time back maybe I’ll dig it out, maybe not.

Jack

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Re: DAY AND NIGHT (Score: 1 )
by dav.smith on Saturday, October 03, 2009 (18:45:17)

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Re: DAY AND NIGHT (Score: 1 )
by browneyesblue on Saturday, October 03, 2009 (10:14:38)

Wow. This was just beautiful. Made me feel magical reading it. And a great example of how two things of the exact opposite can share the love for something amicably.

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Re: DAY AND NIGHT (Score: 1 )
by dav.smith on Saturday, October 03, 2009 (18:46:38)

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Re: DAY AND NIGHT (Score: 1 )
by caity10 on Sunday, October 11, 2009 (22:02:14)

This poem was a lovely read. It painted a really nice picture in my mind and I dont think I'll ever look at the moon or the sun in the same way. Beautifully written Smile