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Poems - dead date (Conor was my muse for this one)

dead date (Conor was my muse for this one)

by nerdgirl

He strokes her long black hair
she sits still with an empty stare
eyes are gray
skin is cold
she is young
he is old

He gently kisses her lips
once so juicy and red
now they are just like his date
dried out and dead

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Re: dead date (Conor was my muse for this one) (Score: 1 )
by BrokenWordsPoet on Saturday, October 24, 2009 (10:52:01)

Hey that is sooo cooooooold.... I have to give you a 10... I wish I could give Conor 10... By the way did somebody say dates... BWP... James.... Its time for Fruit Cakes... Talk about dry and cold..........

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Re: dead date (Conor was my muse for this one) (Score: 1 )
by nerdgirl on Saturday, October 24, 2009 (11:07:14)

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Re: dead date (Conor was my muse for this one) (Score: 1 )
by angeroseblue on Saturday, October 24, 2009 (11:33:13)

where is this dark side coming from
Jenna this cant be you
Marie....you stop this
bad girl
Nice poem though!!

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Re: dead date (Conor was my muse for this one) (Score: 1 )
by nerdgirl on Saturday, October 24, 2009 (11:46:17)

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Re: dead date (Conor was my muse for this one) (Score: 1 )
by Dreaming-Demon on Saturday, October 24, 2009 (13:21:08)

Nice work...i think this is great....I think conor started somethin good;)

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Re: dead date (Conor was my muse for this one) (Score: 1 )
by nerdgirl on Saturday, October 24, 2009 (13:26:20)

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Re: dead date (Conor was my muse for this one) (Score: 1 )
by Disfrazada on Saturday, October 24, 2009 (23:49:15)

Very well done nerdgirl. Smile

"My love may be dead... but never forgotten,
I'll admire her corpse till the day it's rotten,
For a love like this shall never die,
And the Lavender oil keeps away the flies". Twisted Evil

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Re: dead date (Conor was my muse for this one) (Score: 1 )
by nerdgirl on Sunday, October 25, 2009 (03:51:31)

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Re: dead date (Conor was my muse for this one) (Score: 1 )
by thewholesoul on Monday, November 02, 2009 (10:37:37)

sorry jenna it took me so long to actually find this poem. i'm only after reading it in the slams!!

very well done indeed - the tone is icy cold and the comparison between the dead person and a date - rocks!!!

take good care and
best wishes
conor (p.s. thanks too for the mention in your title, i am truly honoured)

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Re: dead date (Conor was my muse for this one) (Score: 1 )
by nerdgirl on Monday, November 02, 2009 (12:06:17)

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