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Poems - November Thoughts
| | November Thoughtsby Jayelle
Drear November unravels
the sweater of my hopes,
winding it into a ball of yarn,
which April discovers and re-knits
into a verdant blanket of dreams.
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Re: November Thoughts
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by angeroseblue on Sunday, November 01, 2009 (02:36:13) |
this is a very nice poem Jayelle
i love november...cool weather 
enjoyed your thoughts
love the use of the word
verdant....lovely
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Re: November Thoughts
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by Jayelle on Sunday, November 01, 2009 (20:28:21) |
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it~~Joan
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Re: November Thoughts
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by WordLover on Sunday, November 01, 2009 (07:01:18) |
I love this! "the sweater of my hopes" - what a GREAT line.
Sandy
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Re: November Thoughts
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by Jayelle on Sunday, November 01, 2009 (20:36:38) |
Thanks, Sandy! This one is a few years old. It kind of just "unravelled" itself one day. November is such a dreary month...no beautiful colorful foliage like September & October, no sparkly snow & ice glittering on the trees as in Dec. thru March, no bright new green of the spring, no flowers of the summer. It has to be the dreariest month of the year here in New England! 
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Re: November Thoughts
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by nerdgirl on Sunday, November 01, 2009 (16:36:12) |
This is lovely. I love lines 2 and 5!
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Re: November Thoughts
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by Jayelle on Sunday, November 01, 2009 (20:43:22) |
Thank you! The whole image just came into my mind; I "felt" it that way...the gray month, all the hope seeping out of me, balanced by the hope of spring in the future. Joan
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Re: November Thoughts
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by Liquid_Chaos on Sunday, November 01, 2009 (17:16:45) |
Great imagery! Beautiful poem L_C
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Re: November Thoughts
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by Jayelle on Sunday, November 01, 2009 (20:45:06) |
Thank you, L_C, for reading and for your kind comments. Joan
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Re: November Thoughts
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by liarbird on Monday, November 02, 2009 (01:51:41) |
G'day Joan...
Lovely poem Joan...quite opposite to us down below. We're sweltering with 40C today and we're still a month away from summer.
thanks Joan.
Lindsay
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Re: November Thoughts
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by Jayelle on Monday, November 02, 2009 (07:36:06) |
Oh my! I wouldn't want it that warm for sure! I guess it's not so much the cold as it is how gray it will be after the brilliant, vivid reds & yellows & oranges of the fall foliage. Thank you for stopping in to read, Lindsay, & good luck in keeping cool! Joan
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Re: November Thoughts
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by realrhoda on Monday, November 02, 2009 (12:21:22) |
Love it!!!a ten
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Re: November Thoughts
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by Jayelle on Monday, November 02, 2009 (19:44:29) |
Wow! a ten from a great writer as yourself is special indeed! Thank you so much for your kindness. Joan
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Re: November Thoughts
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by Dreaming-Demon on Monday, November 02, 2009 (19:47:05) |
BEAUTIFUL!
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Re: November Thoughts
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by Jayelle on Monday, November 02, 2009 (20:10:25) |
Thank you so much for reading & replying! I'm glad you liked it. Joan
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