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November Thoughts

by Jayelle

Drear November unravels
the sweater of my hopes,
winding it into a ball of yarn,
which April discovers and re-knits
into a verdant blanket of dreams.




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Re: November Thoughts (Score: 1 )
by angeroseblue on Sunday, November 01, 2009 (01:36:13)
this is a very nice poem Jayelle
i love november...cool weather Laughing Laughing
enjoyed your thoughts
love the use of the word
verdant....lovely


Re: November Thoughts (Score: 1 )
by Glen on Sunday, November 01, 2009 (04:05:56)
very nice jayelle it might even rush april through


Re: November Thoughts (Score: 1 )
by WordLover on Sunday, November 01, 2009 (06:01:18)
I love this! "the sweater of my hopes" - what a GREAT line.

Sandy


Re: November Thoughts (Score: 1 )
by oxavier on Sunday, November 01, 2009 (08:10:09)
Beautiful poem Joan..........love this line "verdant blanket of dreams", nice one to welcome november, and the holidays Very Happy


Re: November Thoughts (Score: 1 )
by nerdgirl on Sunday, November 01, 2009 (15:36:12)
This is lovely. I love lines 2 and 5!


Re: November Thoughts (Score: 1 )
by Liquid_Chaos on Sunday, November 01, 2009 (16:16:45)
Great imagery! Beautiful poem L_C


Re: November Thoughts (Score: 1 )
by fogglethorpe on Sunday, November 01, 2009 (19:41:59)
"Drear" is a bit of an obscure word...but I still enjoyed this whimsical little seasonal piece.


Re: November Thoughts (Score: 1 )
by Ridge on Sunday, November 01, 2009 (20:52:37)
So very lovely!


Re: November Thoughts (Score: 1 )
by liarbird on Monday, November 02, 2009 (00:51:41)
G'day Joan...
Lovely poem Joan...quite opposite to us down below. We're sweltering with 40C today and we're still a month away from summer.
thanks Joan.

Lindsay


Re: November Thoughts (Score: 1 )
by realrhoda on Monday, November 02, 2009 (11:21:22)
Love it!!!a ten


Re: November Thoughts (Score: 1 )
by Dreaming-Demon on Monday, November 02, 2009 (18:47:05)
BEAUTIFUL!



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