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Poems - No more reflections...

No more reflections...

by Dreaming-Demon

I see your beautiful reflection,
in the lake before my eyes.

I also see your depression,
I hear your whispers and your cries.

Your in my every thought,
not one memory fades away.

I crave you here next to me,
each and everyday.

I miss the warmth found in your arms,
every single kiss.

Every moment with you dear,
was nothing less then bliss.

ripples form in the water,
as tears fall from my face.

How I wish to be with you,
please take me from this place.

I see my reflection,
and the pain inside my eyes.

I see my depression,
and I know you hear my cries.

I feel your arms around me,
from my death I am not shy.

I love this world I live in,
but it's time to say goodbye.

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Tags: Sadness, death, love

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Re: No more reflections... (Score: 1 )
by shazza on Saturday, November 07, 2009 (02:01:53)

Wow this actually broght a tear to my eyes..... beautiful and heartfelt I always enjoy your work my friend 10 out of 10 and a favourite too
Take care
Shazza x

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Re: No more reflections... (Score: 1 )
by nerdgirl on Saturday, November 07, 2009 (07:12:23)

wow Dreaming. You have a great gift. This is heartbreaking and beautiful

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Re: No more reflections... (Score: 1 )
by Unbound on Saturday, November 07, 2009 (09:18:53)

Its so sad... Very unexpected ending.

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Re: No more reflections... (Score: 1 )
by WordLover on Saturday, November 07, 2009 (17:36:17)

Dreaming - a sadly beautiful piece. Makes me feel your pain.

Sandy

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Re: No more reflections... (Score: 1 )
by Tink on Saturday, November 07, 2009 (17:42:41)

...so many more poems that need to be released,
Dreaming-Demon !

Soul shaking is what this is ! I concur with all the good people here!

Tink Smile

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Re: No more reflections... (Score: 1 )
by questionajourney on Saturday, November 07, 2009 (17:46:14)

you nailed it d demon..well done..q

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Re: No more reflections... (Score: 1 )
by angeroseblue on Saturday, November 07, 2009 (17:46:35)

i love that you put just as much effort in the sad poems as you do the dark
you certainly are not a slacker Very Happy

i enjoy your work

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Re: No more reflections... (Score: 1 )
by Disfrazada on Saturday, November 07, 2009 (20:21:35)

Wow Demon, this is a very touching poem my friend. Very beautiful and yet very sad, this really tugs at the heartstrings. Take care of yourself my friend.

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Re: No more reflections... (Score: 1 )
by Liquid_Chaos on Saturday, November 07, 2009 (20:53:07)

A very heartfelt piece. So beautiful and yet so sad. L_C

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Re: No more reflections... by cmiamigal on Sunday, November 08

Re: No more reflections... (Score: 1 )
by badmalthus on Sunday, November 08, 2009 (01:01:33)

A superb heartfelt write Raymond.......I hope the final stanza was metaphorical in some way.
Cheers......Harry

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Re: No more reflections... by Dreaming-Demon on Sunday, November 08

Re: No more reflections... (Score: 1 )
by CRUSH-247 on Sunday, November 08, 2009 (06:29:26)

Outstanding Cool

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Re: No more reflections... (Score: 1 )
by thewholesoul on Sunday, November 08, 2009 (09:48:56)

brilliant man - lovin the sentimental journey.

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Re: No more reflections... (Score: 1 )
by defiance on Sunday, November 08, 2009 (12:19:51)

Another good poem DD. Be well my friend

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Re: No more reflections... (Score: 1 )
by Beauty_In_Pain on Sunday, November 08, 2009 (17:35:37)

Hauntingly beautiful. 10 and a fave. I don't know the details of what's transpired in your life, but I do know that everything happens for a reason. We don't always know what it is, just keep your head up, Im sure amazing things are in store for you my friend.

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