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Poems - Save It

Save It

by Beauty_In_Pain

Just save it Boy
I don't want to be rude
But you should know by now
I don't want to be used

I've seen you around
And you know it's a shame
You've had how many girls?
Like it's some kind of a game

You can save the sob story
About how bad your life is
That wont inspire me
To give you a kiss

You spin the lines around
but nothings really changed
I won't be the new topic,
Another girl that you banged

This is me walking away
Because you're probably diseased
Save the "Rejected" comeback
We know the slut isn't me

I don't care 'who' you think you are
Truth is you're a whore
You've bragged how many times?
Of having eight girls or more

Your true colors are shown
So I won't wish you good luck
Please save the "I love you"
Find someone else to fuck

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Tags: Cheater, Lies, Spunky

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Re: Save It (Score: 1 )
by shazza on Saturday, November 07, 2009 (02:06:55)

Wow need I say more.....
Take care
Shazza x

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Re: Save It (Score: 1 )
by Dreaming-Demon on Saturday, November 07, 2009 (02:25:40)

DAMN, I love this...flowed well, and fun to read, well done

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Re: Save It (Score: 1 )
by lash570 on Saturday, November 07, 2009 (06:09:57)

very good stuf!!!

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Re: Save It (Score: 1 )
by Awkward on Saturday, November 07, 2009 (18:17:09)

one SMALL mistake - last line, u forgot "else"
other than that
I LOVED it
I disagree with Huber abt the "fuck" - I think its kinda necessary to add the xtra punch, while anger is obvious throughout the poem, I feel like the "fuck" just adds that cherry on top
well done
: D

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