User Info

Welcome Anonymous

Yesterday's Top

Rank Name

01: maryanns

02: Pujakins

03: FuchsiaFesti...

04: Ozymandias

05: GlennMcCrary

06: blackswan

07: vexations

08: tint

09: raw

10: induce

11: doNotcallmeJan

12: york2frisco

13: poetrylover

14: wordsmithwan...

15: yumchesspie

More ...

Donations

Above and Beyond

GotPoetry is a community supported site.

Due Date: May 31
May Goal: 180.00
Gross Amount: 0.00
PayPal Fees: 0.00
Net Balance: 0.00
Below Goal: 180.00
Site Currency: USD

Poems - Wild Fun

Wild Fun

by wolfinwindow

abrupt, fast and frightening
the girls like vines they cling
as time seems to hang
and the thing goes bang
with a sense of dread
they watched ahead
their heart are facing very fast
they see the end coming near at last
up and down, all around they race
as the roller coaster slides into place

<< prev | Youth and Children's Poetry | next >>

"Wild Fun" | Login/Create an Account | 5

The comments are owned by the poster. We aren't responsible for their content.

Re: Wild Fun (Score: 1 )
by Keifer on Wednesday, November 25, 2009 (10:39:55)

fun ride!!

| Parent

Re: Wild Fun (Score: 1 )
by Zbird on Wednesday, November 25, 2009 (12:50:41)

lol! i knew it was a rollercoaster from the first line........... (one typo in that first line...the first word Smile

...abrupt... sorry, i don't mean to be so abrupt ;-D. but a fun ride none the less!

| Parent

Re: Wild Fun (Score: 1 )
by wolfinwindow on Thursday, November 26, 2009 (14:37:45)

yhsnk you for the help. It was a type o I will slow down

| Parent

Re: Wild Fun (Score: 1 )
by orangetulips12 on Friday, November 27, 2009 (05:57:58)

cute poem i like the last 3 lines, Karen

| Parent

Re: Wild Fun (Score: 1 )
by MoZark on Saturday, November 28, 2009 (20:23:02)

This brought to mind the school picnic…my-o-my was that a long time ago. Rolling Eyes

Cute. Something for the young at heart. Have a grand tomorrow.

Jack

| Parent

[ wolfinwindow's profile | Commenting Members (5) |

]

Added on: 25-Nov-2009 | Hits: 453 |

Full author copyright - Exclusive Right held by author.