
User Info

Yesterday's Top

Donations
 GotPoetry is a community supported site.
Due Date:
May 31
May Goal:
180.00
Gross Amount:
0.00
PayPal Fees:
0.00
Net Balance:
0.00
Below Goal:
180.00
Site Currency:
USD
|
Poems - Someone Cares
| | Someone Caresby PassionatePoet
A friend long ago, a Friend today
Somehow I know it was meant this way
In the real world I've met you as a beautiful young girl
In the virtual world I've found that your a shining pearl
Connected through wires and computer screens
Bringing back memories and beautiful scenes
Now that I'm trying to renew our connection
I'm letting you know of my love and affection
Not the kind that says I want you as mine
But as a person for whom I would like to shine.
Sharing hopes and dreams, sorrow and sadness
Hoping to remove some of our madness.
So now I'm saying, that I'm here for you
Offering to change your grey skies to blue
All that I need is an affirmation
That says that you hope I may be your salvation.
So I pose a question, 'Will you allow me in?'
And let me show you what I have within.
I won't let you down and let trust go to waste
And promise to do my best to replace
The broken dreams and unanswered prayers
And let you know someone really cares.
| | 
| "Someone Cares" | Login/Create an Account | 4 |
|
|
| The comments are owned by the poster. We aren't responsible for their content. |
|
Re: Someone Cares
(Score: 1 )
by misty678 on Thursday, November 26, 2009 (12:54:42) |
Beautiful Write
 |
Re: Someone Cares
(Score: 1 )
by nerdgirl on Thursday, November 26, 2009 (18:31:11) |
this is so sweet and thoughtful. lovely poem
 |
Re: Someone Cares
(Score: 1 )
by PassionatePoet on Thursday, November 26, 2009 (19:06:16) |
Thank you for the lovely comments. It's about a special person in my life named Cathy. My first friend when I was a child, my first crush. I lost touch with her until 30 years later. I'm trying to let her know but being a romantic and a passionate(strongly committed and emotional) I think I scared her away. I wanted her to be a good friend and I think I gave her the wrong impression. I know it doesn't relate but I had to tell someone and I can't tell the people who know us. I f'd up as usual by giving too much too fast. Seems like the story of my life. Take care. And Thanks again.maybe someday I'll learn.
 |
Re: Someone Cares
(Score: 1 )
by Leggolas on Friday, November 27, 2009 (17:14:44) |
Sometimes we give our all to that special person that our heart desires. And in doing so, it may well become too much too soon, but the fact that you were prepared to offer so much to someone, shows that yours is a love, sincere in its honesty, an admirable quality that should be cared for and treasured. Regards. Leggolas.
Added on: 26-Nov-2009 | Hits: 401 |
 |