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Poems - Glorious Rain
With vigour and sends sparkles to my hope filled eyes
Carefree days of friendship, fun, festivity
In the glorious rise
From dawn til dusk when days are long
I wish that they would carry on
As in the darkness I crave to feel it's warm lifegiving kiss
Pray to Godless heavens for my pagan God's return
To take rapture in it's soul warming bliss.
Yep...I like the summer! I know this is a poor poem in response to your own, but it was improvised and quickly turned to forced rhyme!
I enjoyed your depiction of rain though...you show a lot of potential with your first post and I will read more when you submit. As to the rain; I can live with the wet, I just don't like winter much and would prefer to hibernate for a few months between seasons!
Take care, spence
Love it! Thanks for the comment, I enjoy summer (which comes in the late months here) too.
i find storms the most comforting weather in the whole wide world- i feel surrounded my high energy air, and the coolness that follows a storm is so soothing- by contrast i cannot stand very hot humid or hot dry weather- as i live in australia- this is a bit of a problem!@!!!!!!! i think i'll need to move somewhere....somewhere overcast with plenty of stomrs;-))))
i really liked ths poem- i also love the shimmery afterglow on a city that has just been raindrenched- everything seems more poignant- more true....like the rain sweeps away the grit and the sound for only a few minutes before the rain starts t dry and the water dissipate......very nice work- i was pleasantly syurprised by this- very well done. millie
I'm glad you liked it, thanks for the comment, Millie.
I think my favorite image is:
'enlightened in a momentary brilliance'
I'm going to add this to my favorites.
Added on: 11-Dec-2009 | Hits: 659 |
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