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Poems - Movies Today

Movies Today

by Awkward

Love scenes give me the creeps
that almost kiss or slushing lips
holly believe it or not
saliva doesn't look or hear too good
so keep it off the screen
and out of my ears
Death scenes make me laugh
looking to the sky
as if their higher-calling was ringing up
finally drink the dead man's cup
with gospel shrieks or tapping keys
either way its meant to be
emotionally-ridden
soul-touching
"extremely deep"
Emotion has evacuated cinema
generic lines like
"what's happening"
or
"do you realize what you have done?"
have taken over scripts
with music in the back
to get a rise from the audience
sitting and unfortunately
listening

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Re: Movies Today (Score: 1 )
by angeroseblue on Saturday, December 26, 2009 (01:23:06)

Death scenes in movies are laughable
these days
i was watching a movie(scary)with a friend and laughed through and through
death scenes and all

i love your starting lines... Laughing

of this poem
enjoyed the read

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