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Poems - I Fucked Up Again

I Fucked Up Again

by deadalchemist

I just cant help what it is I do...
I try so hard I just get to scared,
I just want to be perfect,
And not be such an idiot.
I just try so hard...to not be me.
And all I do is fuck up again,
See the mess I've put myself in
When there wasn't a problem before,
There may be one now,
Until the day comes
That I really started something
When there was never anything to begin.

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Re: I Fucked Up Again (Score: 1 )
by Ridge on Monday, January 04, 2010 (23:48:41)

A sentiment we all feel upon occasion, sometimes more than others. I relish the introspective desperation of this piece…it screams “why do I” but a question is never actually asked, I like that quality about this poem very much. We all fuck up, perhaps you’re just real good at it Wink

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Re: I Fucked Up Again (Score: 1 )
by Dreaming-Demon on Tuesday, January 05, 2010 (00:46:49)

excellent piece, i know how how u feel on this one

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Re: I Fucked Up Again (Score: 1 )
by omegapaf on Tuesday, January 05, 2010 (04:05:47)

it took me far too long to learn that me, was the only person i could be. i like stef. she bakes cookies, and makes lovely warm scarfs. you're just tired, and you're doing fine. i'll send you a nagging e-mail tomorrow - belly button stuff - paul.

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Re: I Fucked Up Again (Score: 1 )
by angeroseblue on Tuesday, January 05, 2010 (08:24:35)

the last two lines ...wow
like questioning yourself without the question
and we all are guilty of it
so
don't beat yourself up
we are human and we err ..SO WHAT Wink

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Re: I Fucked Up Again (Score: 1 )
by butterflyzrfree on Tuesday, January 05, 2010 (23:24:26)

Don't be so hard on yourself, Steph! You are beautiful, lovely and I am positive that it is not as big a mess and not your fault the way you describe. And you write a heluva poem, BTW! Great careful word chioce in standard American vernatular. Very nicely done. Keep it up!

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Re: I Fucked Up Again (Score: 1 )
by deadalchemist on Tuesday, January 05, 2010 (23:30:08)

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Re: I Fucked Up Again (Score: 1 )
by lonewolf on Thursday, January 07, 2010 (08:15:42)

awesome piece i know how it feels because i myself am going through it myself

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Re: I Fucked Up Again (Score: 1 )
by PinkNeonFlavor on Monday, February 08, 2010 (19:57:05)

This is a well-put peace. It is embedded in such melancholy yet so refreshing to be put on paper. Never let those words and feelings be bottled up inside....

I hope you feel good now.
My friend, this was truly a depressing piece.

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Re: I Fucked Up Again (Score: 1 )
by deadalchemist on Monday, February 08, 2010 (19:58:40)

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Re: I Fucked Up Again (Score: 1 )
by Twelve on Monday, March 29, 2010 (00:41:48)

I really loved this write. i can totally associate with it.

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Re: I Fucked Up Again (Score: 1 )
by deadalchemist on Monday, March 29, 2010 (08:06:48)

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Re: I Fucked Up Again (Score: 1 )
by Judis57 on Monday, July 05, 2010 (16:23:53)

i think you hit the nail on the head for most of us...we try everyday not to fuck up, but sometimes, without even trying, we fuck something up...even when it seems that there is no way something could be fucked up, leave it to me to find that way. good job.

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Re: I Fucked Up Again (Score: 1 )
by chey. on Sunday, April 17, 2011 (22:00:31)

this explains pretty much my whole life.

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