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Fullness

by MichaelFirewalker

there is time that is needed

and many, many openings of heart/mind to be pleaded

and many, many givings of the self

many, many softenings of sight from out the night

into openings of knowings

and orgasms of dawn Light

for all of it together is our coming into right




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Re: Fullness (Score: 1 )
by muse on Thursday, March 04, 2010 (17:21:01)
beautiful

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    Re: Fullness (Score: 1 )
    by MichaelFirewalker on Wednesday, April 07, 2010 (16:20:00)
    thank you, muse.......................michael

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Re: Fullness (Score: 1 )
by AngelPhoenix on Friday, December 17, 2010 (03:30:08)
a bit choppy, I suggest taking out every "and" and the last "many" Also, changing "heart/mind" to "heart-mind" for better visual rhythm.

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