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without a daughter's love

by dreamdragon

she has no love for me
i gave her everything
she has no love for me

my heart aches everyday
she has no love for me
my heart aches everyday

where did i go wrong
my heart aches everyday
where did i go wrong




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Re: without a daughter's love (Score: 1 )
by wolfinwindow on Saturday, March 13, 2010 (09:29:47)
Nice poem. all children trying their wings get that way.

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    Re: without a daughter's love (Score: 1 )
    by dreamdragon on Saturday, March 13, 2010 (14:47:12)
    thanks but it sucks when 90% of the time your aunt n mom are the only ones who comment your poems im thinkn maybe i should just give up on this !!!!!!!!!

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Re: without a daughter's love (Score: 1 )
by Zbird on Saturday, March 13, 2010 (09:30:38)
maybe it's not that she has no love for you, but that she is trying to find herself separate from you. give her time. she will realize how much you love her and it will be returned.

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    Re: without a daughter's love (Score: 1 )
    by dreamdragon on Saturday, March 13, 2010 (16:00:10)
    Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing no its will never end she lives for drama she needs to have a productive life i love her so much i did to much for her thanks love u

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Re: without a daughter's love (Score: 1 )
by orangetulips12 on Sunday, March 14, 2010 (23:35:17)
dreamdragon, this is so sad. my heart goes out to you. karen



peace and blessings

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    Re: without a daughter's love (Score: 1 )
    by dreamdragon on Monday, March 15, 2010 (21:53:39)
    yes it is thank you for the comment

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