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Til divorce do us part

by nerdgirl

I was reading a poem called Marriage by babygay and came up with this while commenting.

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You meet, you greet

look into his eyes and see his soul

Soon you realize he is the one who makes you whole

Love and laughs, wedding vows, you wear the band

as he holds your heart, only few understand

Love is unconditional

Marriage is forever

Til death do us part

Is how its supposed to be

For some though, sad but true

Its Til divorce do us part

Sorry God....

Sometimes thats all thats left to do





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Re: Til divorce do us part (Score: 1 )
by PinkNeonFlavor on Monday, March 29, 2010 (17:37:11)
Very good write and yes it is funny
Laughing Laughing Laughing

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    Re: Til divorce do us part (Score: 1 )
    by nerdgirl on Monday, March 29, 2010 (17:58:32)
    Im relieved that at least one other person thinks its funny. Now others can diss all they want!

    Thanks

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      Re: Til divorce do us part (Score: 1 )
      by SieOma on Tuesday, April 13, 2010 (20:09:34)
      "Sorry God"

      Laughing

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Re: Til divorce do us part (Score: 1 )
by wordsmithwannabe on Monday, March 29, 2010 (20:40:42)
speaking as a fellow divorcee, yes sometimes that's all that's left to do!! GO TO BED!!!!

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    Re: Til divorce do us part (Score: 1 )
    by nerdgirl on Monday, March 29, 2010 (21:08:11)
    IM GOING TO BED.... in a few min.... hehe

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      Re: Til divorce do us part (Score: 1 )
      by angeroseblue on Wednesday, March 31, 2010 (23:06:54)
      I think he means come to bed
      and let Lola join!! Embarassed Shocked Laughing Twisted Evil Twisted Evil

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Re: Til divorce do us part (Score: 1 )
by Aravind on Tuesday, March 30, 2010 (05:56:13)
hmm...i THINK it CAN be funny...but overall its a good poem..

maybe it should be in the sad category?? I dont know! Very Happy

I give u a nine!!

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    Re: Til divorce do us part (Score: 1 )
    by nerdgirl on Tuesday, March 30, 2010 (07:22:21)
    I think its funny because I do believe that marriage should be sacred and that we shouldnt get divorced but sometimes there are really no other options. I just have a weird sense of humor sometimes. im being sarcastic towards God at the end of the poem.. thats why I think its funny.

    My divorce wasnt just some "we dont get along"thing... my ex went to jail.

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      Re: Til divorce do us part (Score: 1 )
      by Aravind on Tuesday, March 30, 2010 (08:05:07)
      So sorry..i do get the sarcasm ..

      Its a good poem ultimately.

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Re: Til divorce do us part (Score: 1 )
by music8208046 on Tuesday, March 30, 2010 (11:00:42)
summed it up oh so very accurately!!!

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    Re: Til divorce do us part (Score: 1 )
    by nerdgirl on Tuesday, March 30, 2010 (13:39:44)
    I tried. Laughing

    Thanks

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Re: Til divorce do us part (Score: 1 )
by induce on Tuesday, March 30, 2010 (11:51:35)
nerdy, a conversational feel to your piece ~ it works. induc'ed

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    Re: Til divorce do us part (Score: 1 )
    by nerdgirl on Tuesday, March 30, 2010 (13:40:06)
    Thank you!

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Re: Til divorce do us part (Score: 1 )
by Keeperofhope on Tuesday, March 30, 2010 (16:53:28)
Very Happy totally true Very Happy
haha

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    Re: Til divorce do us part (Score: 1 )
    by nerdgirl on Wednesday, March 31, 2010 (04:31:06)
    Yepp... the sad sad truth... Laughing

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Re: Til divorce do us part (Score: 1 )
by maryanns on Tuesday, March 30, 2010 (17:49:43)
Idyllic bargains made in life may go astray in afterthought...
Heck, I thought you were divorcing Chris, m'dear.
Sincerely glad you're not, he's a keeper.
Don't worry, be happy. Mary Ann
Remember Raggae!

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    Re: Til divorce do us part (Score: 1 )
    by nerdgirl on Wednesday, March 31, 2010 (04:31:45)
    Yeah my cyberhubby is awesome! Laughing

    Thanks Mary Ann!

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Re: Til divorce do us part (Score: 1 )
by thewholesoul on Tuesday, March 30, 2010 (22:27:20)
enjoyed very much the tone of this poem. and its so true what you say - till divorce do us part. lol

be well and take care
conor

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    Re: Til divorce do us part (Score: 1 )
    by nerdgirl on Wednesday, March 31, 2010 (04:32:35)
    I think they should add that into the vows... whats the use of starting a marriage with a lie? Laughing
    Thank you Conor Smile

    Glad to see you around again!

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Re: Til divorce do us part (Score: 1 )
by Ilan on Wednesday, March 31, 2010 (09:12:07)
Jenna, as a divorcee of 5 years with a child
I'm unsure whether to laugh or cry

na that's ridiculous, but so was my marriage

the point I'm making Is that my marriage
was real but we were mismatched

So divorce was necessary....

It's a sad poem and makes me sad
ilan

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    Re: Til divorce do us part (Score: 1 )
    by nerdgirl on Wednesday, March 31, 2010 (10:32:54)
    Sorry it made you sad. Divorces are sad but sometimes they are for the better. My exhusband did something very bad and then he lost his mind. Now he sais we divorced because we didnt see eye to eye.. I laugh when he sais it because he knows damn well things got bad when I found out he was downloading childporn.

    Im sad that my marriage didnt work out but im happy that i divorced a man who may have been a threat to my child. We get along and I let him talk to his son. I dont think its right for my child to not know who is father is and when he is older someday I will tell him what happend and leave it up to him weather he wants to have his father in his life or not.
    Its easier because his father is half way around the world. If I had to see him alot I would be sad too.

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Re: Til divorce do us part (Score: 1 )
by angeroseblue on Wednesday, March 31, 2010 (23:08:02)
Laughing Laughing Laughing
SOMETIMES!!! Wink

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    Re: Til divorce do us part (Score: 1 )
    by nerdgirl on Thursday, April 01, 2010 (14:32:55)
    ALot of the time... Laughing

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Re: Til divorce do us part (Score: 1 )
by liarbird on Saturday, April 03, 2010 (21:30:18)
G'day Jenna...
We can't read the future so is marriage a gamble that sometimes doesn't work out and if it's not working out...well we only get one kick of the footy don't we.
Thanks Jenna.
Lindsay

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    Re: Til divorce do us part (Score: 1 )
    by nerdgirl on Sunday, April 04, 2010 (03:31:13)
    Yeah these days people tend to think about themselves too much... or they dont think about consequences when acting foolish. Seems to me those are the main reasons for divorce.
    Thanks for stopping by!

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Re: Til divorce do us part (Score: 1 )
by rondo on Sunday, April 04, 2010 (11:10:20)
loved the rhyme of it...and the truth

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    Re: Til divorce do us part (Score: 1 )
    by nerdgirl on Sunday, April 04, 2010 (15:11:51)
    Thank you Rondo! Always glad to see you on my page!

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