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Monster

by Hambone

it's not safe here
in the park
I think you ought to know

if you've a problem
with the dark
perhaps you'd better go

when there's no moon
it's pretty black
you really must be still

there's a monster
with a sack
and he would do you ill

if he should sense
that you are here
he'll have you in a trice

he'll teach you
what he knows of fear
and it's not very nice




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Re: Monster (Score: 1 )
by induce on Wednesday, June 30, 2010 (06:27:28)
Hambone, the last stanza was perfect, good scary stuff!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
nice!. induce

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Re: Monster (Score: 1 )
by maryanns on Wednesday, June 30, 2010 (19:20:54)
Woooo, my friend - I felt a chill as I read your poem. Somehow I do believe I was transported to Oct 31st. Good 'un, Mary Ann

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Re: Monster (Score: 1 )
by thewholesoul on Wednesday, June 30, 2010 (23:12:37)
super little write. dark but giddy at the same time. best wishes

conor

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Re: Monster (Score: 1 )
by ken2shoes on Thursday, July 01, 2010 (08:51:34)
good simple scary
don't know the word 'trice' have to look it up.

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Re: Monster (Score: 1 )
by rondo on Wednesday, July 28, 2010 (02:01:38)
sweetly edgy hambone...nice work

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