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Poems - NEW VISIONS (an unfinshed poem).

NEW VISIONS (an unfinshed poem).

by dav.smith

As the sun unzips the eastern sky
and the night scuttles of into the west
a new beginning is being formed
to be revealed through the dawns fog

As winter winds chases off the heat
and the chill invigorates the soul
a freshness is experienced
an awakening to new visions

As a life goal is achieved
and pieces are place correctly
a reason to life is found
for honesty and truth bare no malice

## I could put in another three verses, But
for what ever deranged reason, I have
chosen not to.##

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Re: NEW VISIONS (an unfiished poem). (Score: 1 )
by PinkNeonFlavor on Thursday, July 08, 2010 (01:15:30)

Love this! It is very vivid. =) I especially like these lines

As winter winds chases off the heat
and the chill invigorates the soul...

and also
for honesty and truth bare no malice
Very Happy

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Re: NEW VISIONS (an unfiished poem). (Score: 1 )
by dav.smith on Thursday, July 08, 2010 (01:19:41)

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Re: NEW VISIONS (an unfiished poem). (Score: 1 )
by PinkNeonFlavor on Thursday, July 08, 2010 (02:04:59)

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Re: NEW VISIONS (an unfiished poem). (Score: 1 )
by wordsmithwannabe on Thursday, July 08, 2010 (01:55:46)

dAVE, finished or unfinished, i thought this piece was beautiful from the very first line. nicely done, selfishly i will wish for more to be added just because i want to keep reading...cheers my friend, hope you are well

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Re: NEW VISIONS (an unfiished poem). (Score: 1 )
by dav.smith on Thursday, July 08, 2010 (02:03:47)

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Re: NEW VISIONS (an unfinshed poem). (Score: 1 )
by Ilan on Friday, July 09, 2010 (05:25:47)

Dave you've written what I often have
felt and that is the achievement of a
fine poet, I like unfinished pieces as
leaves mystery behind

Kind regards
ilan

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Re: NEW VISIONS (an unfinshed poem). (Score: 1 )
by dav.smith on Friday, July 09, 2010 (07:23:38)

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Re: NEW VISIONS (an unfinshed poem). (Score: 1 )
by jean on Friday, July 09, 2010 (06:10:29)

liked your poem and the unfinished ending

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Re: NEW VISIONS (an unfinshed poem). (Score: 1 )
by dav.smith on Friday, July 09, 2010 (07:25:47)

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