The Rain's Song

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So this is why little girls are so sweet... all the while we little boys play with frogs and jump into mud puddles... missing the rainbows and the connections to heaven's home... I know why god punishes me... this is not the thoughts I experienced while dancing in the rains of youth, but It is what perhaps I might have preferred... good, strong write here... all the best to you and all of your relations... Michael.

Re: The Rain's Song (Score: 1 ) by Superchick on Friday, July 23, 2010 (08:55:16)

Thank you very much for your comment.


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Re: The Rain's Song (Score: 1 ) by Michaelw1two on Friday, July 23, 2010 (09:46:02)

You are quite welcome Sarah. I have visited your profile page and have begun to peruse your current posts... I, at times read the works of other poets such as yourself while I write or review my posts... this morning was one of those times and your work caught my attentions... Please feel free to visit my profile and perhaps read a few of my posts... thank you again for your good works and efforts, and for your posts here at gp... I trust you will circle up into a group of good writers here... all of the best in life to you and all of your relations... Michael.


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Re: The Rain's Song (Score: 1 ) by Superchick on Sunday, July 25, 2010 (00:57:03)

Thank you for taking the time to read my work. I will most definatly do the same. As a matter of fact, I will go a step further and add you as a buddy. I always read up on everyone on my buddy list when my schedule permits me to.


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i liked it very much
best wishes
karishma

Re: The Rain's Song (Score: 1 ) by Superchick on Sunday, July 25, 2010 (00:57:39)

Thank you very much for your lovely comment


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WoW! I loved this poem so much! It was total beauty! I loved it so much!

Re: The Rain's Song (Score: 1 ) by Superchick on Sunday, July 25, 2010 (00:58:55)

AWW! Thank you for your enthusiastic comment. I'm glad something I wrote brought you warmth, its one of the reasons I post work here. Your comment gave me warm fuzzies.


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the name lured me in
but the poem kept me captivated
with in its beauty
enjoyed this much
peace
niki

Re: The Rain's Song (Score: 1 ) by Superchick on Sunday, July 25, 2010 (00:59:41)

Thank you. Im so gald you liked it. Thank you for your comment.


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This is, my new...favorite write from you.

I love this write
it is so good

Re: The Rain's Song (Score: 1 ) by Superchick on Sunday, July 25, 2010 (01:01:08)

It's not really new...just reposted it from my other site. I wrote it last year. Lol. Anything I write from here on in will be new. LOL. I am glad you liked it though. Thanks Sammi.


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Wow! Love this. I find it hard how you can love the rain so much, I HATE it.
Take care, Chris.

Re: The Rain's Song (Score: 1 ) by Superchick on Thursday, October 21, 2010 (19:57:01)

I LOVE rain....guess im just odd, I thank you for reading though.


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