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Poems - MIND TWIST.

MIND TWIST.

by dav.smith

The dreams are all shattered, bytes of my realm
my memory is on a cassette, that sometimes won't play
vocally pronounced words form, from a torn,tatty recall impulse
my descriptive ability, some times dysfunctional dribble
imagination, batters the reality from which I think
in prompt mind speak, stumbles and falls from my tongue
the laughter in side, is not heard by others ,I hope
right side of my brain, seems to be laughing at the left
scratched memories, block a direct thought and is lost.
logical speech fails me, and another word is lost.

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Re: MIND TWIST. (Score: 1 )
by poetess41 on Wednesday, September 15, 2010 (04:11:45)

Nothing twisted about this poem though..I really enjoyed reading it..*smiles*

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Re: MIND TWIST. (Score: 1 )
by dav.smith on Thursday, September 16, 2010 (02:07:44)

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Re: MIND TWIST. (Score: 1 )
by twistedmistress on Thursday, September 16, 2010 (10:54:27)

ahh I hate when that happens
well done dave
♥
niki

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Re: MIND TWIST. (Score: 1 )
by dav.smith on Tuesday, September 21, 2010 (03:09:33)

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Re: MIND TWIST. (Score: 1 )
by Dreaming-Demon on Friday, September 17, 2010 (01:33:30)

cool write my friend, nicely done

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Re: MIND TWIST. (Score: 1 )
by dav.smith on Tuesday, September 21, 2010 (03:10:44)

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Re: MIND TWIST. (Score: 1 )
by Ozymandias on Friday, September 17, 2010 (05:53:59)

I know the problem, Dave. Well expressed, good to read.

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Re: MIND TWIST. (Score: 1 )
by dav.smith on Tuesday, September 21, 2010 (03:12:03)

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Re: MIND TWIST. (Score: 1 )
by StarDust on Saturday, September 18, 2010 (01:20:54)

Nicely expressed!! "right side of my brain, seems to be laughing at the left" I know what you mean!! Smile

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Re: MIND TWIST. (Score: 1 )
by dav.smith on Tuesday, September 21, 2010 (03:12:52)

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Re: MIND TWIST. (Score: 1 )
by rondo on Tuesday, September 21, 2010 (03:37:53)

sounds like good gonge to me....nice write

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Re: MIND TWIST. (Score: 1 )
by dav.smith on Wednesday, September 22, 2010 (06:59:13)

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