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When Light Leaves Us

by questionajourney

Eagles turned to dragons
the sun was leashed by night.
All the earthly minions
bowed down to say goodbye.
Shadows started breeding
shade became the norm.
Prayers caught in the net
of an unforgiving storm.
Born to love the daylight
But black fog has taken my beloved
Sunshine's form--
Taken my beloved Sunshine's form.

*Had the tune of "The Warning" by Sabbath in my head.





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Re: When Light Leaves Us (Score: 1 )
by Dreaming-Demon on Wednesday, September 15, 2010 (23:21:43)
Very cool my friend, a fave

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    Re: When Light Leaves Us (Score: 1 )
    by questionajourney on Thursday, September 16, 2010 (20:12:18)
    right on d demon..thank you friend

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Re: When Light Leaves Us (Score: 1 )
by induce on Sunday, September 19, 2010 (11:20:17)
qev..........i love to hear you read it another brain opener...'ductinn

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Re: When Light Leaves Us (Score: 1 )
by butterflyzrfree on Wednesday, September 22, 2010 (20:23:23)
A bit scrambled, but in a good way.

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    Re: When Light Leaves Us (Score: 1 )
    by questionajourney on Wednesday, September 22, 2010 (20:44:27)
    couldn't shake the tune from my head that day..had to pay a bit of a tribute..by an old fan of Black Sabbath...didn't expect many to catch it, i'm glad you saw it:)

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