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The Path

by Woodster

To walk the path
With forks and bends
Is the choice we’re given
With no amends
We take a turn
We follow a course
Life.. should it get better?
Or will it get worse...

Born to live...
Born to die...
Live our life...
Or live the lie...
Life is for living..
You hear it said..
What do I choose..
The living or the dead…?

Woods Kelly ©2010





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Re: The Path (Score: 1 )
by poetess41 on Saturday, September 18, 2010 (00:51:45)
Ahhh Woodsy the life choices we have to make...great write and read my friend...*smiles*

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    Re: The Path (Score: 1 )
    by Woodster on Saturday, September 18, 2010 (11:22:55)
    Lady P... you have a way of drawing a smile to my face Smile Thank you my friend... I'm happy you enjoyed this...Stay safe...Woods...

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Re: The Path (Score: 1 )
by astaniga on Saturday, September 18, 2010 (03:49:06)
i love it
its so beautiful and true
great wonderful write

ecofriendly regards
karishma

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    Re: The Path (Score: 1 )
    by Woodster on Saturday, September 18, 2010 (11:19:51)
    karishma you are so kind in your words and they mean alot to me... thank you my friend I'm glad you enjoyed this...Stay safe...Woods...

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Re: The Path (Score: 1 )
by Craigd741 on Saturday, September 18, 2010 (04:10:19)
Great write about the choices of life. You said a lot in a few words.

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    Re: The Path (Score: 1 )
    by Woodster on Saturday, September 18, 2010 (11:17:56)
    Thank you Craig I appreciate your words... I try to express more between the lines...Stay safe my friend...Woods...

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Re: The Path (Score: 1 )
by Glen on Saturday, September 18, 2010 (07:49:16)
very good write woody ,and sometimes we dont always get a choice it just happens

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    Re: The Path (Score: 1 )
    by Woodster on Saturday, September 18, 2010 (11:14:48)
    Hey Glen, long time my friend.. My experience shows me there are realistically very few choices we really have... we just think we have... Thank you for your words I always value them...Stay safe...Woods...

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Re: The Path (Score: 1 )
by JoAn on Saturday, September 18, 2010 (19:07:08)
Woods, a beautiful, thought provoking poem. You raise the bar, my friend, always making the words work for you, and this poem works for me. ~JoAn
Very Happy Keep those words working Very Happy
and
Very Happy Keep Smiling Very Happy

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    Re: The Path (Score: 1 )
    by Woodster on Saturday, September 18, 2010 (20:53:05)
    JoAn, as ever you are kind with your words... I do try to invoke thought and questions within most of my work.. although sometimes I don't do a very good job of it, I like to think that the message within still gets across...Thank you my friend I do value your thought's...Stay safe...Woods...

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Re: The Path (Score: 1 )
by gottawrite on Sunday, September 19, 2010 (15:46:10)
love it. Yes, we choose every moment don't we?

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    Re: The Path (Score: 1 )
    by Woodster on Sunday, September 19, 2010 (18:55:11)
    That my friend is my question...Do we truely choose our path or is it pre written for us...Thank you for reading and enjoying my friend...Stay safe...Woods

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Re: The Path (Score: 1 )
by Leggolas on Sunday, September 19, 2010 (15:57:05)
An inspiring poem for Life Woods. Fond Regards. Mark.

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    Re: The Path (Score: 1 )
    by Woodster on Sunday, September 19, 2010 (18:57:14)
    Hey Mark How you doing my friend...it's been along time...thank you for your words they mean alot to me...Stay safe...Woods..

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Re: The Path (Score: 1 )
by Ilan on Monday, September 20, 2010 (08:25:41)
You got me Woody, in the heart!

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    Re: The Path (Score: 1 )
    by Woodster on Monday, September 20, 2010 (09:37:41)
    Ilan my friend you have such a big heart...thank you my friend, keep that heart pumping...Stay safe...Woods...

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Re: The Path (Score: 1 )
by StarDust on Monday, September 20, 2010 (08:47:47)
wooooo Shocked Very Happy awesome write my friend! enjoyed!!

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    Re: The Path (Score: 1 )
    by Woodster on Monday, September 20, 2010 (09:34:40)
    Thank you kindly Mishael...I'm happy you enjoyed...i'll hop over to see you soon Smile ...Stay safe...Woods..

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Re: The Path (Score: 1 )
by omegapaf on Thursday, September 23, 2010 (06:02:03)
a traditional buddhist saying goes " the path and the gateway have no use, or meaning once the objective is in sight " - love and a straight path - paul.

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    Re: The Path (Score: 1 )
    by Woodster on Thursday, September 23, 2010 (10:20:34)
    Hey Paul... I like that saying.. My query would be, how would we know the objective is in sight or has been has been reached... And was the journey enlightening for us the be worthy of the objective... Your words as always are valued... Thank you my friend... Stay safe... Woods

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Re: The Path (Score: 1 )
by oSoLovely1986 on Thursday, September 23, 2010 (18:58:39)
another great write by you my friend. love the last stanza..

Born to live...
Born to die...
Live our life...
Or live the lie...
Life is for living..
You hear it said..
What do I choose..
The living or the dead…?

fave for me, much love
<3Angela

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    Re: The Path (Score: 1 )
    by Woodster on Thursday, September 23, 2010 (19:28:00)
    Bless you my angelic friend... I was going to put the second stanza up on its own to begin with... but thought it went well with the 1st...Thank you Angela as always your words are valued and looked forward to...Stay safe...Woods...

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      Re: The Path (Score: 1 )
      by oSoLovely1986 on Thursday, September 23, 2010 (19:32:29)
      Smile Smile your so sweet. and you you made a good call.. they go great together!
      <3angela

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        Re: The Path (Score: 1 )
        by Woodster on Thursday, September 23, 2010 (19:50:56)
        !!!! Me! Sweet!! try telling that to my old drill sergeant Laughing Laughing he'd never believe you Smile ... much love & Stay safe as always...Woods..

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          Re: The Path (Score: 1 )
          by oSoLovely1986 on Thursday, September 23, 2010 (19:56:20)
          haha! i will convince him! lol no doubt Smile Smile
          <3Angela

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Re: The Path (Score: 1 )
by Pujakins on Thursday, September 23, 2010 (23:15:20)
Nice sense of movement to the lines. I like the philosophy too! Warm Wishes and Peace to your Heart, Tasha

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    Re: The Path (Score: 1 )
    by Woodster on Thursday, September 23, 2010 (23:43:47)
    I thank you for your words Tasha... My heart at peace... one day my friend, maybe... In the meantime I will continue my trade... to protect those that need it or those I hold dear...Stay safe my friend...Woods

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Re: The Path (Score: 1 )
by badmalthus on Tuesday, September 28, 2010 (01:49:41)
At the beginning of each day we have choices to make......even if we choose to let others make those choices on our behalf......haha. Great write Woods.
Cheers.......Harry

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    Re: The Path (Score: 1 )
    by Woodster on Tuesday, September 28, 2010 (19:15:05)
    Hey Harry my friend Smile good to see you.... You are so right.. I'm looking for a volunteer to tell me Lol...Thank you for your words my friend always enjoy hearing from one of my fav writers...Stay safe...Woods..

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Re: The Path (Score: 1 )
by Dreaming-Demon on Wednesday, September 29, 2010 (19:21:51)
a fave for me my friend, an awesome write

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    Re: The Path (Score: 1 )
    by Woodster on Friday, October 01, 2010 (13:25:42)
    Now I am truly honoured my friend...Thank you that means a great deal to me...Stay safe...Woods..

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Re: The Path (Score: 1 )
by raw on Friday, October 01, 2010 (05:45:08)
Very nice write. So right as life is about choices. Well done.

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    Re: The Path (Score: 1 )
    by Woodster on Friday, October 01, 2010 (13:27:33)
    I thank you kindly my friend.. life Is all about choices.. even the ones we don't realise we make...I appreciate your words...Stay safe..Woods..

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Re: The Path (Score: 1 )
by Zbird on Saturday, May 21, 2011 (16:04:29)
wow! profound thoughts there my friend.

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