Mother may I please ?

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i like the way you did this one strong and powerful words
very good write

Re: Mother may I ? (Score: 1 ) by Temptress on Thursday, October 07, 2010 (11:11:44)

It's specifically for a friend of mine who lets his wife rule the roost and he never has a say in anything , It must be terrible to live that way. I thought marriage way a give and take situation. But he brings that on himself and life is about choices right? Thank you Glen for the comment XOXOX from my heart to yours


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Nice write! I have a few guys I'd dedicate this poem to lol

Re: Mother may I please ? (Score: 1 ) by Temptress on Friday, October 08, 2010 (09:43:59)

So did I . One in particular comes to mind. Don't know how one loses their identity once the get married always having to ask, can I do this? Can I go there? Like they don't have a mind of their own anymore. Thanks Blu for dropping in and the comment.


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this is just great. I never read something like this before
very much enjoyed and I could picture it in my head too
KOH

Re: Mother may I please ? (Score: 1 ) by Temptress on Monday, October 25, 2010 (11:32:45)

Thank you so much for the comment it is always a treat to see you dropped in


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yes indeed i have one guy in mind i can relate this one too! lol awesome write my friend. love it so. be well becky i hope your good
<3Angela

Re: Mother may I please ? (Score: 1 ) by Temptress on Monday, October 25, 2010 (11:34:08)

It's insane the way this guy lets his wife treat him but I think we all have a person we can relate this poem too. Thanks for the comment Angela


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Great write Beckster .... your words ring true of a few I know... to partner/marry is not to own, it is to join two hearts as one to grow Together not a purchase to command... It's good to see you back on active service my dear friend... look forward to more... as ever Stay safe becky...Woods..

Re: Mother may I please ? (Score: 1 ) by Temptress on Monday, October 25, 2010 (11:36:14)

You are absolutely right about that and why people loose their own identity after marriage is beyond me. Your presence on my page is always a treat for the Temptress


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This is one guy how does conform to that life. My wife would agree. Really good strong and solid write. I think we all may know someone like this though.Peace and hugs to you. dAVE

Re: Mother may I please ? (Score: 1 ) by dav.smith on Saturday, October 30, 2010 (00:36:12)

Sorry should be 'DOESN'T conform'. dAVE


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Re: Mother may I please ? (Score: 1 ) by Temptress on Monday, November 08, 2010 (22:31:15)

Thanks dAVE for stopping in and the comment


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Eeee-gads, Becky - an excellent psychological poem, in my humble opinion. I find men I know in here; in fact I must actually attract that particular type of man. I can only ask w-h-y....? I never wanted to be their Mommy. Excellent, my friend. Mary Ann

Re: Mother may I please ? (Score: 1 ) by Temptress on Monday, November 08, 2010 (22:33:35)

He is a good friend of mine and it makes me so upset that he lets her treat him that way but I guess all in all he likes the " Mommy " figure otherwise he would not have married her. Thanks MA for the comment .


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hmmmm reminds me of a couple of guys i know. one in particular, who goes on all macho when his wife isn't there, and when she is, all he says is " yes dear, i'll do that straight away dear....sorry dear. yes i'll put them shelves up now dear ". however in his defence, she is a terrifying woman with a voice like broken glass, and can make a man impotent just by looking at him ha ha. - whatcha been up to becky? - paul.

Re: Mother may I please ? (Score: 1 ) by Temptress on Tuesday, November 23, 2010 (13:09:33)

I hate a man who can't hold his nuts and stand up for his rights to anything. I want my man to be a part of me but also have his own identity and freedom, so if he wants to go fishing or whatever the case may be he doesn't have to ask first . I'm trying to settle in the Boonies and get accustomed to their backward ways here but other than that doing good my friend. Scratches behind the ears and tummy rubs for you and that smelly old hound of yours XOXOXO.


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Re: Mother may I please ? (Score: 1 ) by omegapaf on Wednesday, November 24, 2010 (07:19:48)

can i go fishing in the boonies becky? ha ha.


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Hands down, you have the biggest balls of them all, Becky. LOL! I loved this. You tell it like it is, and always deliver a punch. Your technique is not easy to imitate and is always genuine. Don't change.

Re: Mother may I please ? (Score: 1 ) by Temptress on Tuesday, November 30, 2010 (00:31:35)

I can't stand a man who just is sooooooooooo whipped he is afraid of his own shadow but I think we all know at least one of these men Thanks Tara for the comment


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Re: Mother may I please ? (Score: 1 ) by browneyesblue on Tuesday, November 30, 2010 (10:39:59)

Nothing is more unappealing or unsexy. I 100% agree.


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One powerful piece of poetry T...loved it.
Cheers...Harry

Re: Mother may I please ? (Score: 1 ) by Temptress on Tuesday, January 25, 2011 (22:58:36)

Thanks Harry , love your new avatar pic


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nicely done you captured this social issue well...peace

Re: Mother may I please ? (Score: 1 ) by Temptress on Tuesday, January 25, 2011 (22:59:25)

Thanks buddy for stopping by and sorry for the late reply.


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wow this is excellent my friend, im sorry i didnt read this sooner

Re: Mother may I please ? (Score: 1 ) by Temptress on Tuesday, January 25, 2011 (23:00:44)

Thanks for the comment DD hope all is well with you.


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Well written. And a subject that is so true. I use a bit more graphic term for it. lol. Powerfull expression.

I really liked this poem. just need to say so.

Very entertaining.

Wow, what a powerful piece Becky!! I've known a few people who were like that. They would live their life in fear of their partner, and then that'll lead them to ask for permission constantly, for simple, mundane activities. It's so ridiculous. It's psychological effect within relationships..and you've captured that well in your poem. Great write, Becky!!

Re: Mother may I please ? (Score: 1 ) by Temptress on Wednesday, October 12, 2011 (12:21:09)

Thank you for your comment and it was so true about this guy it was just sickening that he had to ask permission to even piss nice to see you back sister


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wow - quite intense read here - you tell it like it is - todays world is so how do you say - confused - with so many ways to do the wrong thing - you know - relationships today are very challenged - with my space cell phones twitter accounts - people worry - and you can't blame them - one bad day an argument and one phone call or message can destroy something good - so I guess a woman wants to be careful - I don't know - but thanks for posting your thoughts - respectfully ^v^ me

Re: Mother may I please ? (Score: 1 ) by Temptress on Monday, November 14, 2011 (11:09:46)

The person in the poem seems to understand things better when written and was trying to let him know you can't always be a door mat or walk on egg shells with the one you supposedly are married to. In my eyes its a give and take relationship but seem to me he was just a child in having to ask about everything.........in short people should have their own space to do things they enjoy without question or convivtion thank you for the comment and truly loved your poem I commented on. XOXOXOX from my heart to yours


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your words flowed into each other such a beautiful poem

Re: Mother may I please ? (Score: 1 ) by Temptress on Monday, January 16, 2012 (19:35:22)

Thank you so much for the comment


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I couldn't help but laugh to this delightful piece of work!The words you have chosen to describe this man's weakness and insecurity,are simply amazing! Thank you for sharing!

Re: Mother may I please ? (Score: 1 ) by Temptress on Wednesday, March 14, 2012 (17:39:58)

I would like to thank you for the wonderful comment and taking the time to read my poem


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Brilliant write! There was just the right amount of humor in this! Again, brilliant poem.