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opaque windows

by micsir

Looking through opaque windows
Is starting to look more and more like my life





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Re: opaque windows (Score: 1 )
by poetess41 on Monday, November 08, 2010 (00:35:49)
I think we all go through that at sometime in our lives..great write...*smiles*

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    Re: opaque windows (Score: 1 )
    by micsir on Wednesday, November 10, 2010 (00:14:28)
    I'm seing interesting things, just not seeing clearly. Wink

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Re: opaque windows (Score: 1 )
by jean on Monday, November 08, 2010 (05:20:49)
interesting poem liked it short to the point

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    Re: opaque windows (Score: 1 )
    by micsir on Wednesday, November 10, 2010 (00:14:56)
    thanks! was glad to share.

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      Re: opaque windows (Score: 1 )
      by jean on Wednesday, November 10, 2010 (00:27:24)
      your welcome

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Re: opaque windows (Score: 1 )
by swt_mora on Thursday, November 11, 2010 (17:14:13)
Good truth and realization behind the words. It is relatable and can be understood.

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    Re: opaque windows (Score: 1 )
    by micsir on Friday, November 12, 2010 (17:17:41)
    Nice of you, thanks.

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Re: opaque windows (Score: 1 )
by Leggolas on Tuesday, November 16, 2010 (19:35:26)
Unfortunately Life can mist our windows, just takes a little effort and some elbow grease to clear the haze my friend. Fond Regards. Mark.

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    Re: opaque windows (Score: 1 )
    by micsir on Tuesday, November 16, 2010 (21:54:37)
    and like a mon -et
    it -just may
    still end -up
    looking -o.k.

    Cool

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Re: opaque windows (Score: 1 )
by Pujakins on Wednesday, November 24, 2010 (23:40:08)
I really like the two versions of look in this poem. Very clever. Nice poem and fun observation. Very artistic view. Warm Wishes, Tasha

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    Re: opaque windows (Score: 1 )
    by micsir on Thursday, November 25, 2010 (14:42:59)
    Glad you picked up on that, but especially that you noticed this wasn't meant as a complaint so much as an observation on, no matter how unclear our paths are we can still make out the general direction we are on. all the best- mike

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      Re: opaque windows (Score: 1 )
      by Pujakins on Friday, November 26, 2010 (15:37:29)
      And ya know what? Anyone who believes she or he can see clearly is fooling her/himself however when in the present moment, at least that moment is relatively clear, so... Warm Wishes, Tasha

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Re: opaque windows (Score: 1 )
by GlennMcCrary on Thursday, November 25, 2010 (00:20:15)
Very interesting point of view. I enjoyed this. Smile

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    Re: opaque windows (Score: 1 )
    by micsir on Thursday, November 25, 2010 (14:44:13)
    Thanks Glenn, But don't thank me, thank the glazed windows in my bathroom. Laughing

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Re: opaque windows (Score: 1 )
by mamta on Thursday, November 25, 2010 (12:20:20)
could relate well to this. i notice now that you have been trying out a lot of short poems. i miss the other ones though. hope to see some like that soon

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    Re: opaque windows (Score: 1 )
    by micsir on Thursday, November 25, 2010 (14:46:00)
    Thanks Mamta, I sure do hope an epic pops up soon also. I've gotta really catch a flow for the long ones to materialize. namaste - mike

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Re: opaque windows (Score: 1 )
by thewholesoul on Saturday, November 27, 2010 (16:20:11)
loved it mate. fav

best wishes
conor

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    Re: opaque windows (Score: 1 )
    by micsir on Monday, November 29, 2010 (12:02:44)
    nice of you, thanks conor.

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Re: opaque windows (Score: 1 )
by wordsmithwannabe on Wednesday, December 08, 2010 (14:17:57)
yep. can totally relate to this...thanks Mike

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    Re: opaque windows (Score: 1 )
    by micsir on Tuesday, December 14, 2010 (14:13:10)
    it's the dreamer in me talking; that or to much sitting behind the screen. Laughing

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Re: opaque windows (Score: 1 )
by sarracenia on Tuesday, December 14, 2010 (19:25:49)
Hm. Maybe you have a cloud in your iris, ...and it coalesced opaque. yours in obcurity Bl.Dhl.a

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    Re: opaque windows (Score: 1 )
    by micsir on Saturday, December 18, 2010 (13:32:09)
    It just may be. Laughing

    "I am the bubble-boy(sung to the tune of 'I am the Walrus')"

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Re: opaque windows (Score: 1 )
by butterflyzrfree on Sunday, December 19, 2010 (11:54:52)
Yes! Love this analogy!

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    Re: opaque windows (Score: 1 )
    by micsir on Tuesday, December 28, 2010 (00:27:24)
    A window into my soul!

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Re: opaque windows (Score: 1 )
by maryanns on Thursday, December 23, 2010 (21:08:48)
So much depth in two short lines...
really enjoyed and relate to this myself.
Happy holidays, Mike. Peace, Mary Ann

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    Re: opaque windows (Score: 1 )
    by micsir on Tuesday, December 28, 2010 (00:29:31)
    Nice of you to say. Happy Holidays. Looking forward to the new year, Cheers, Mike xxo

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Re: opaque windows (Score: 1 )
by omegapaf on Thursday, January 06, 2011 (18:58:32)
sometimes as we get older our view from the window becomes less, and less clear, and the cobwebs start to form in the corners when we aren't looking. nice write mike - a very belated happy new year - paul.

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    Re: opaque windows (Score: 1 )
    by micsir on Sunday, January 09, 2011 (13:17:14)
    i guess we just have to remember things for when they were in a different light. always good to hear from you paul, happy new year 'mon ami'. mike

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Re: opaque windows (Score: 1 )
by Zbird on Sunday, September 23, 2012 (08:03:37)
I know what you mean! so much said in two small lines!

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