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Poems - Through darkness

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Through darkness

by Blue

Dim the lights and I see u
All alone and scared
Bewilder and unchanged
Years may have pass by
But you’re still that little girl
Surrounded by your thoughts
Not knowing what to make of them
Waiting and hoping
For life to make its mark on you
To bring you peace
Bring you happiness
And put your mind at ease
Only I can see what is destined for you
What your really feel
What you really want
Who you really are
But who am I to say
What would become of you?
I am only your shadow
Walking along side of you
Through this God forsaken world
That has now become our playground.





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Re: Through darkness (Score: 1 )
by BrokenWordsPoet on Sunday, November 21, 2010 (11:00:23)
Shadow that is very well said... What a place we live, laugh and cry in... BWP... James...

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    Re: Through darkness (Score: 1 )
    by Blue on Sunday, November 21, 2010 (11:10:39)
    Thanks James for taking the time to read my lines...
    Big xoxo's Blue... This is the result of 2 glasses of wine..=)

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Re: Through darkness (Score: 1 )
by Daniel on Sunday, November 21, 2010 (12:05:44)
A very Creative
and understandable
Poem,
Blue.

It's like your
talking to more
than yourself but other
people that is alone and
emotional.

Really enjoyed reading
your Poem.

Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile

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    Re: Through darkness (Score: 1 )
    by Blue on Sunday, November 21, 2010 (12:09:14)
    Thanks Daniel...the whole purpose of writting is to reflect on it and hope other people can relate to your pieces as well... xoxo

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Re: Through darkness (Score: 1 )
by Craigd741 on Sunday, November 21, 2010 (13:23:49)
A very eerie and unsettling piece. Nicely penned.

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    Re: Through darkness (Score: 1 )
    by Blue on Sunday, November 21, 2010 (13:29:05)
    Thank You! Xoxo Blue

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Re: Through darkness (Score: 1 )
by PinkNeonFlavor on Sunday, November 21, 2010 (18:08:58)
This confusion feeling is depressing. I hope all is well...stay safe, Blue. Wink

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    Re: Through darkness (Score: 1 )
    by Blue on Sunday, November 21, 2010 (18:18:01)
    Getting there...slowly but surely...thanks sweetie for your well wishes...big hugs to you my friend! xoxo Blue

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      Re: Through darkness (Score: 1 )
      by AeroVeto on Sunday, November 21, 2010 (21:18:54)
      I liked this...

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        Re: Through darkness (Score: 1 )
        by Blue on Sunday, November 21, 2010 (21:22:18)
        Glad u did! xoxo Blue

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Re: Through darkness (Score: 1 )
by wolfinwindow on Sunday, November 21, 2010 (23:33:55)
this is an excellent piece. enjoyed. good job.

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    Re: Through darkness (Score: 1 )
    by Blue on Monday, November 22, 2010 (18:57:56)
    Thanks Wolf... I am so glad you got to enjoy it! xoxo Blue

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Re: Through darkness (Score: 1 )
by Dreaming-Demon on Tuesday, November 23, 2010 (14:41:38)
I love this my friend, well done

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    Re: Through darkness (Score: 1 )
    by Blue on Tuesday, November 23, 2010 (19:17:58)
    Thank you sweetie! xoxo

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Re: Through darkness (Score: 1 )
by questionajourney on Wednesday, December 15, 2010 (02:16:32)
This world once belonged to the human spirit and sacred search..it seems amidst all the confusion and selfishness, an awakening of the masses is the only way to heal globally...though this is sad, i feel these types of poems need to be seen and introspected upon...we are all strangers to an extent, but brothers and sisters- first..be well..qaj

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    Re: Through darkness (Score: 1 )
    by Blue on Wednesday, December 15, 2010 (17:56:45)
    Very well said my friend... let the healing begin... Thanks for your lovely thought ... xoxo Blue

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